Dreams

I dreamed of this My whole life I only existed To fulfill this dream. It didn’t just happen I worked for it And when it came I didn’t want it anymore. I dreamed of this And suddenly It has become A nightmare.

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Daver Austin

Date: 7/28/2014 11:11:00 AM

Yes. Be careful what you wish for. Congrats on the election. daver

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/27/2014 6:12:00 PM

Kristine, This happens to be an excellent poem, to have featured on the poetry soup's home page. Congratulations, enjoy having your poem featured this week. Always ~ LINDA ~

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 7/25/2014 6:03:00 AM

- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup, Kristine :) - I choose your first great written free verse - Nice to meet you :) - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- PoetrySoup Rule1: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup a haven. PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Faye Gibson

Date: 7/24/2014 9:20:00 AM

Welcome to Poetry Soup, Kristine. So true for so many people; very good write. I am glad you discovered this nice community of writers and hope you enjoy the site. Read the work of other poet's and comment if you find something you like; many poets will return the favor. Over time you will get to "know" some of us. You are welcome to visit my page anytime. Enjoy!

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 7/23/2014 7:56:00 PM

Hi Kristine, this is such an excellent write - Bravo! Welcome to PoetrySoup!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/23/2014 5:35:00 AM

Kristine,, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community, as I did when I first join, March 2010. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry ha-ha a special pair:) here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@

Jeremy Street

Date: 7/23/2014 2:20:00 AM

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Jeremy Street

Date: 7/23/2014 2:19:00 AM

Bummer, But Don't Stop Believing Dreaming....KLove *