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Dreams

DREAMS

star-dazed
angel dust

sifting through the night
sandman meanderings
in drifting snowflake patterns

"sky-dive through one's own subconscious"





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For Nette's Contest: "Create Your Pyramid"
6/3/14 by Carrie Richards

Copyright © Carrie Richards | Year Posted 2014

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Nette Onclaud Date: 6/16/2014 3:04:00 PM Your style here has a quality of lyricism--so dreamy, carrie.. belated congrats on your top slot in my challenge!.. huggs Login to Reply

Richard Lamoureux Date: 6/14/2014 7:55:00 AM This is beautiful, congratulations. Login to Reply

Estela Canama Date: 6/14/2014 6:29:00 AM Simply amazing... Congrats! Login to Reply

Elaine George Date: 6/14/2014 5:44:00 AM You have created a very dreamlike quality with this dreamy verse Carry. many conrat's on your fist place win. ben Eaine Login to Reply

Carolyn Devonshire Date: 6/13/2014 1:11:00 PM How creative, Carrie! Congratulations on your big win, dear. Love, Carolyn Login to Reply

Len Gasun Date: 6/13/2014 9:13:00 AM Awesome poem my dear friend Carrie. My hearty congratulations as well on your well-deserved first win! Thanks a lot for stopping on mine.Hugs and cheers! love lots, Leonora Login to Reply

Frederic Parker Date: 6/12/2014 2:41:00 PM sky dive through one's own subconscious, great line..congratulations on a strong win Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 6/11/2014 11:57:00 PM DREAMY!!! and thinking outside the box. Congrats!! Login to Reply

Skat A Date: 6/11/2014 11:08:00 PM Carrie, :) CONGRATS in Nette's CREATE YOUR PYRAMID contest! Luv ~SKAT~ Login to Reply

Tim Ryerson Date: 6/11/2014 8:10:00 PM As Ronnie Reagan famously said to Jimmy Carter: Theerre you go AGAIN! Another 1st place winner...Fabulous write my friend - Tim Login to Reply Tim Ryerson Date: 6/11/2014 8:17:00 PM PS: Gonna send you a classical music playlist via Spotify as soon as get my new PC working right. It includes music from The Lord of the Rings, Braveheart and The Last of the Mohicans...

Casarah Nance Date: 6/11/2014 7:59:00 PM Yahoo, an amazing first place, Way to be awesome :) "sky dive through one's own subconscious" oh I love it! Login to Reply

Mohan Chutani Date: 6/11/2014 7:31:00 PM Congrats for your top win Carrie. was a top one on imagery on dreams. my fav. again. Mohan Login to Reply

Debbie Guzzi Date: 6/11/2014 3:15:00 PM Congrad's on your win. Light & Love Login to Reply

Faye Gibson Date: 6/11/2014 2:19:00 PM Congratulations on the top place, Carrie. This is a beautiful poem. Login to Reply

Pandita Sietesantos Date: 6/11/2014 1:43:00 PM Bravo, Carrie. Congratulations on your great win - this is a true gem! Login to Reply

Michael Dorken Date: 6/11/2014 12:45:00 PM Wonderful poem--still meandering through my subconscious. Login to Reply

Poet Destroyer A Date: 6/11/2014 9:42:00 AM A beautiful way to say, I've been there. Skydiving through one's own subconscious. Congratulations, with your sweet PYRAMID win.... Hugs ~LINDA~ Login to Reply

Arlene Smith Date: 6/11/2014 6:23:00 AM Congrats on your win with this impressive write!.. Arlene.. Login to Reply

Seren Roberts Date: 6/11/2014 3:59:00 AM congratulations Carrie, superb...Seren Login to Reply

Jan Allison Date: 6/11/2014 2:51:00 AM Many congratulations on your first place win Hugs Jan xx Login to Reply

Paul Callus Date: 6/11/2014 2:44:00 AM This is a deserving top winner, Carrie! That final round-up says it all! Congrats. // paul Login to Reply

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 6/11/2014 2:18:00 AM Kudos Carrie!!! The last line is one exciting exhilarating dive..:) Login to Reply

Tim Smith Date: 6/10/2014 11:19:00 PM A beautiful win Carrie...hugs Tim Login to Reply

Dr. Upma A. Sharma Date: 6/10/2014 11:18:00 PM Amazing creation Carrie ! Congrats on top place win! Login to Reply

Lucilla Carrillo Date: 6/6/2014 11:48:00 PM This Carrie is very nice. Thanks for sharing... Lucilla Login to Reply

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