Carrie Richards Poet Verse

Dreams

DREAMS

star-dazed
angel dust

sifting through the night
sandman meanderings
in drifting snowflake patterns

"sky-dive through one's own subconscious"





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For Nette's Contest: "Create Your Pyramid"
6/3/14 by Carrie Richards

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Nette Onclaud June 16, 2014 at 3:04 PM Your style here has a quality of lyricism--so dreamy, carrie.. belated congrats on your top slot in my challenge!.. huggs

Richard Lamoureux June 14, 2014 at 7:55 AM This is beautiful, congratulations.

Estela Canama June 14, 2014 at 6:29 AM Simply amazing... Congrats!

Elaine George June 14, 2014 at 5:44 AM You have created a very dreamlike quality with this dreamy verse Carry. many conrat's on your fist place win. ben Eaine

Carolyn Devonshire June 13, 2014 at 1:11 PM How creative, Carrie! Congratulations on your big win, dear. Love, Carolyn

Len Gasun June 13, 2014 at 9:13 AM Awesome poem my dear friend Carrie. My hearty congratulations as well on your well-deserved first win! Thanks a lot for stopping on mine.Hugs and cheers! love lots, Leonora

Frederic Parker June 12, 2014 at 2:41 PM sky dive through one's own subconscious, great line..congratulations on a strong win

Andrea Dietrich June 11, 2014 at 11:57 PM DREAMY!!! and thinking outside the box. Congrats!!

Skat A June 11, 2014 at 11:08 PM Carrie, :) CONGRATS in Nette's CREATE YOUR PYRAMID contest! Luv ~SKAT~

Tim Ryerson June 11, 2014 at 8:10 PM As Ronnie Reagan famously said to Jimmy Carter: Theerre you go AGAIN! Another 1st place winner...Fabulous write my friend - Tim Tim Ryerson June 11, 2014 at 8:17 PM PS: Gonna send you a classical music playlist via Spotify as soon as get my new PC working right. It includes music from The Lord of the Rings, Braveheart and The Last of the Mohicans...

Casarah Nance June 11, 2014 at 7:59 PM Yahoo, an amazing first place, Way to be awesome :) "sky dive through one's own subconscious" oh I love it!

Mohan Chutani June 11, 2014 at 7:31 PM Congrats for your top win Carrie. was a top one on imagery on dreams. my fav. again. Mohan

Debbie Guzzi June 11, 2014 at 3:15 PM Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

Faye Gibson June 11, 2014 at 2:19 PM Congratulations on the top place, Carrie. This is a beautiful poem.

Pandita Sietesantos June 11, 2014 at 1:43 PM Bravo, Carrie. Congratulations on your great win - this is a true gem!

Michael Dorken June 11, 2014 at 12:45 PM Wonderful poem--still meandering through my subconscious.

Poet Destroyer A June 11, 2014 at 9:42 AM A beautiful way to say, I've been there. Skydiving through one's own subconscious. Congratulations, with your sweet PYRAMID win.... Hugs ~LINDA~

Arlene Smith June 11, 2014 at 6:23 AM Congrats on your win with this impressive write!.. Arlene..

Seren Roberts June 11, 2014 at 3:59 AM congratulations Carrie, superb...Seren

Jan Allison June 11, 2014 at 2:51 AM Many congratulations on your first place win Hugs Jan xx

Paul Callus June 11, 2014 at 2:44 AM This is a deserving top winner, Carrie! That final round-up says it all! Congrats. // paul

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser June 11, 2014 at 2:18 AM Kudos Carrie!!! The last line is one exciting exhilarating dive..:)

Tim Smith June 10, 2014 at 11:19 PM A beautiful win Carrie...hugs Tim

Dr. Upma A. Sharma June 10, 2014 at 11:18 PM Amazing creation Carrie ! Congrats on top place win!

Lucilla Carrillo June 6, 2014 at 11:48 PM This Carrie is very nice. Thanks for sharing... Lucilla

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