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There are times when my dreams weigh me down Push and twirl me all around But everytime my feet strays from the ground I look up to the clouds and start to count The different blessings that I have found

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Date: 5/10/2013 4:41:00 AM
- Eli, it is beautifully written! - oxox / / Anne-Lise)
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Date: 5/9/2013 10:22:00 PM
Very beautiful poem Eli !!!!
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Date: 5/9/2013 9:58:00 PM
Thank you Eli, you should enter this in the dream contest. I like the poem. thank you for the little hi. I like my dreams when they are weightless. Enjoy the blessings you have. a nice thought ~SKAT~
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