Eli Mahirah Poet Haiku

Dreams

There are times when my dreams weigh me down
Push and twirl me all around
But everytime my feet strays from the ground
I look up to the clouds and start to count
The different blessings that I have found

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Anne-Lise Andresen May 10, 2013 at 4:41 AM - Eli, it is beautifully written! - oxox / / Anne-Lise)

Arthur Vaso May 9, 2013 at 10:22 PM Very beautiful poem Eli !!!!

Skat A May 9, 2013 at 9:58 PM Thank you Eli, you should enter this in the dream contest. I like the poem. thank you for the little hi. I like my dreams when they are weightless. Enjoy the blessings you have. a nice thought ~SKAT~