Seren Roberts Poet Couplet

Dreams

Lie in a bath of foaming suds to dream
Thinking that I am in your arms again

Can feel your heart beating next to mine
Sinewy legs, round my body entwined

Hot kisses up and down my spine
Whispers of undying love divine

Such dreams so sensual refresh you as true
But I wake up and find I’m not with you.

Dreams so deep do release your pain
Only to feel them begin to ache again

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Carol Sunshine Brown December 3, 2012 at 7:53 AM Congratulations on your super placement in Michael's "Deep Dreams" contest Seren. I am sorry this is late. Love, Carol

Len Gasun November 23, 2012 at 11:36 PM This is a very beautiful couplet which I enjoyed reading Seren! Congratulations on your awesome win! love and hugs, Leonora Seren Roberts November 24, 2012 at 3:49 AM Thank you for the congrats, glad you enjoyed it ...Seren

Nicole Marrier November 23, 2012 at 7:00 PM congrats on your win. many can connect to your words. Seren Roberts November 24, 2012 at 3:48 AM thats a nice thing to say Nicole. many thanks ....Seren

Sara Kendrick November 23, 2012 at 6:07 PM Passionate winning work..Congrats ..Sara Seren Roberts November 23, 2012 at 6:37 PM Thank you Sara ..............Seren

Poet Destroyer A November 23, 2012 at 5:57 PM Seren, congratulations!;-) With your "deep dream" win in Michael's awesome contest. Good night~PD Seren Roberts November 23, 2012 at 6:36 PM Thank you P.D....

Heather Ober November 23, 2012 at 7:00 AM The worst kind of dream - waking up to realize it never actually happened. Very well done! Congrats :) Seren Roberts November 23, 2012 at 1:25 PM Thats true Heather, thanks for stopping by .....Seren

Debbie Guzzi November 23, 2012 at 6:10 AM Congrad's on Your Win. Light & Love

Michael J. Falotico November 23, 2012 at 5:48 AM Congrats Seren on you win in my Deep dream contest... hugs Michael

Harry Horsman November 18, 2012 at 3:08 PM wow Seren, this is lovely, you really bring the reader into the poem, again awesome poem... soul mail Seren Roberts November 18, 2012 at 5:13 PM Thanks Harry, mail answered lol ...Seren

David Williams November 18, 2012 at 10:25 AM Seren nicely penned, distant visions and dreams...David Seren Roberts November 18, 2012 at 11:39 AM Thank you David......Seren p.s. Tenby is a nice area to live. David Williams November 18, 2012 at 10:48 AM have a sister near Tenby...