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Dreams

Sunlight tickles my eyes Hypnagogic hallucinations steal the show with surprise A creature creeps I gasp, in fascination’s glow he leaps He schemes as toadstools blow dreams Sunlight tickles my eyes I gasp, in fascination’s glow dreams

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Speaks Volumes

Date: 11/17/2023 5:37:00 PM

Your rhyme scheme is delightful and the poem, faultless, lovely laf. This is a really wonderful read. Just the pick me up I needed. Thank you dear friend

Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 11/18/2023 8:14:00 AM

I'm glad I could help with the pick up my friend. You should never be down Svvie. Life is short. hugs! :)

Paige Hind

Date: 11/6/2023 9:35:00 AM

A very unusual piece... I liked it!

Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 11/6/2023 9:37:00 AM

Thank you Paige. I think it has a bit of a surreal touch LOL. :)

Bill Baker

Date: 11/6/2023 7:48:00 AM

Dreams can be quite surprising, especially when induced. A poet friend in Texas, Bill

Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 11/6/2023 8:00:00 AM

Surprising, and sometimes frightening. LOL Thanks for stopping by and commenting!

Vijay Pandit

Date: 11/3/2023 8:03:00 AM

Dream unfolding brought to fore in superb vocabulary, Linda. Hypnagogic hallucinations steal the show--awesome and a FAVE!

Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 11/3/2023 9:10:00 AM

Hello dear Vijay. Thank you SO much for the fave. I am glad you enjoyed this one. :)