Dreams

Sunlight tickles my eyes
Hypnagogic hallucinations steal the show
with surprise

A creature creeps
I gasp, in fascination’s glow
he leaps

He schemes
as toadstools blow
dreams

Sunlight tickles my eyes
I gasp, in fascination’s glow
dreams

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Date: 11/17/2023 5:37:00 PM
Your rhyme scheme is delightful and the poem, faultless, lovely laf. This is a really wonderful read. Just the pick me up I needed. Thank you dear friend
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 11/18/2023 8:14:00 AM
I'm glad I could help with the pick up my friend. You should never be down Svvie. Life is short. hugs! :)
Date: 11/6/2023 9:35:00 AM
A very unusual piece... I liked it!
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 11/6/2023 9:37:00 AM
Thank you Paige. I think it has a bit of a surreal touch LOL. :)
Date: 11/6/2023 7:48:00 AM
Dreams can be quite surprising, especially when induced. A poet friend in Texas, Bill
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 11/6/2023 8:00:00 AM
Surprising, and sometimes frightening. LOL Thanks for stopping by and commenting!
Date: 11/3/2023 8:03:00 AM
Dream unfolding brought to fore in superb vocabulary, Linda. Hypnagogic hallucinations steal the show--awesome and a FAVE!
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 11/3/2023 9:10:00 AM
Hello dear Vijay. Thank you SO much for the fave. I am glad you enjoyed this one. :)
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