Linda Alice Fowler Poet Rhyme

Dreams

Sunlight tickles my eyes
Hypnagogic hallucinations steal the show
with surprise

A creature creeps
I gasp, in fascination’s glow
he leaps

He schemes
as toadstools blow
dreams

Sunlight tickles my eyes
I gasp, in fascination’s glow
dreams

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Speaks Volumes November 17, 2023 at 5:37 PM Your rhyme scheme is delightful and the poem, faultless, lovely laf. This is a really wonderful read. Just the pick me up I needed. Thank you dear friend Linda Alice Fowler November 18, 2023 at 8:14 AM I'm glad I could help with the pick up my friend. You should never be down Svvie. Life is short. hugs! :)

Paige Hind November 6, 2023 at 9:35 AM A very unusual piece... I liked it! Linda Alice Fowler November 6, 2023 at 9:37 AM Thank you Paige. I think it has a bit of a surreal touch LOL. :)

Bill Baker November 6, 2023 at 7:48 AM Dreams can be quite surprising, especially when induced. A poet friend in Texas, Bill Linda Alice Fowler November 6, 2023 at 8:00 AM Surprising, and sometimes frightening. LOL Thanks for stopping by and commenting!

Vijay Pandit November 3, 2023 at 8:03 AM Dream unfolding brought to fore in superb vocabulary, Linda. Hypnagogic hallucinations steal the show--awesome and a FAVE! Linda Alice Fowler November 3, 2023 at 9:10 AM Hello dear Vijay. Thank you SO much for the fave. I am glad you enjoyed this one. :)