Dreams

The lights came on But I left my eyes shut I dont want to leave yet

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Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 2/5/2021 10:22:00 AM

Hello James Allan, there are times I do not want to awake from a dream. Like last night i had a good dream i did not want to wake up. enjoy your day my friend.

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 2/5/2021 10:04:00 AM

Few words with much said. I love this and know how you feel. I want to dream longer. I am enjoying reading your many writes. Have a blessed day.....................

Sand Blown

Date: 2/5/2021 9:34:00 AM

...nice wright...can't beat reality....stan sand

Na Na

Date: 12/5/2019 5:15:00 PM

Hi James I enjoyed this. Dreams are wonderful and many times we dont want to open up the eyes