Line Gauthier Poet Free verse

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Dreamlike

fog rolled in over the hill
hovering without a sound
it lingered like a ghost

we held our breath
but saw no movement
not a quiver or a bark

and so the hush of autumn
here was upon us
of that we had no doubt



AP: 3rd place 2022

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Mike Bayles October 26, 2022 at 6:38 PM Very nice, Line. I feel the fog rolling in. Line Gauthier October 26, 2022 at 10:22 PM Thanks for your much appreciated comment, Mike.

Andrea Dietrich October 26, 2022 at 1:18 PM Great atmosphere created in this one. Thanks for your latest visit, Line. I am so behind . I wish I had time to see more of your lovely poems. Line Gauthier October 26, 2022 at 6:34 PM Thank you very much, Andrea ~

Sotto Poet October 26, 2022 at 11:57 AM Line, Your poetry includes some really vivid descriptions and metaphors. Excellent writing with such a fantastic and profound degree of insight. Line Gauthier October 26, 2022 at 6:34 PM Thank you so much, Sotto ~