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Dreaming Still

A restless night past the morning sun kissed my cheek lemon yellow licks through the windows open pane I felt your essence beam. Covered as I was in silken sheets, your amour played the gentleman smiling at my demure dress leaving me dreaming still. *Following the Muses Trail from Ruben O's Blowing You a Kiss

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Cyndi Macmillan

Date: 8/15/2012 8:11:00 AM

Okay, so if this doesn't break his dry spell nothin' will... love it! Take that, writer's block. Methinks a dam will overflow. Hugs to you both, Cyndi ;-)

Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 8/12/2012 8:26:00 AM

Alovely wake up verse Debbie, nice to cuddle between the sheets and dream for awhile.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/11/2012 6:54:00 PM

Debbie, howdy... i love this... and the passion that flows....xox~pd

James Marshall Goff

Date: 8/10/2012 9:50:00 PM

Yes...dreamy....well done...

Mohammad Yamin

Date: 8/10/2012 5:55:00 PM

A touching romantic poem. Refreshing like morning breeze. I love it. Thanks Debbie, for commenting on my poem Let there be Light. You are right bad people enjoy being bad unconsciece of the ephemeral life of this enjoyment. It is sad that they can't read the writing on the wall. They are oblivious of their bleak destiny at the hands of the Providence. Love. -Mohammad