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Dreaming of Nature's Love So Rare

Standing looking across sweeping thoughts and hopes 
alone crying into distant faraway hills and valleys  
dreaming I saw before me a big white puff of smoke 

Drifting low circling from out of chimneys pots high 
slowly moving creeps inner vision dancing with me 
candy floss happily towards the glen sweet aroma scent

Scenting turf fires the nostrils with wild scent upon air as
a sun melting her warm fingers into one's back soothing 
pure in a baby blue clear sky setting, rising high feelings 

Upon a cool caressing Autumn breeze Mother Nature
arrives with songbirds singing sweet clearly with echoes 
and most beautiful tunes carried ever so gently in the air 

Within a quite stillness silently whispers gasp and cry
splitting down the middle a teardrop falls always slowly
in love with this forever dream, and to the end sighs

Standing on the edge of a pretty crystal cool blue pond
while watching the presence of beautiful fairy elves
and their most wonderful laughs and smiles so ever true

Smelling the wonderful aroma of pure mountain air
with that assured feeling the all is fresh, crisp, real
and flowers, plants, and grass talking to one another

Dreaming many perfect dreams of mermaids sitting
grouped in a green water pool at the waterfall’s edge
and sensing their joy, beauty, laughter, and smiles

This is what dreams are made of as we sense and see
most wondrous things and objects of perfect symmetry
as we feel mountain rain and a most delicious soft wind

Mother Nature and her magical world of treasures and
such beauty indeed make all gods of centuries past and
present stand up and applaud graciously our Dreaming One 

Gary Bateman and Liam McDaid – A Collaborated Poem, 
Copyright © All Rights Reserved (November 20, 2014) 
(Terza Rima in Unrhymed Tercet poetic format)

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 11/22/2014 11:52:00 PM
Always the pleasure Liam old friend!
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 11/25/2014 8:38:00 AM
thank you ken dear pal wonderful comment deeply appreciated
Date: 11/22/2014 8:18:00 PM
It involves the senses wonderfully to create a delicious mood for enjoying nature! Keep up on those great collaborations!!
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 11/25/2014 8:36:00 AM
thank you kindly andrea yeah we jell well together smiling wonderful comment dear friend deeply appreciated
Date: 11/22/2014 3:55:00 PM
I do love the fairy elves and the fantasy world you two created-Charma
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 11/25/2014 6:23:00 AM
oh sure we painted smiling a unicorn charmaine you know me might even come up with a flying turtle yet wonderful comment dear friend deeply appreciated
Date: 11/22/2014 2:18:00 PM
Super thoughts with inner rhythm...I enjoyed your dreaming style...Thank you very much...Best to you dear poet...
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 11/25/2014 6:20:00 AM
sandip wonderful comment dear pal thank you so kindly heartfelt appreciated
Date: 11/21/2014 11:29:00 PM
forgot my 7
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Date: 11/21/2014 11:28:00 PM
Beautifully written both of you , Gary & Liam :) eve
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 11/25/2014 6:18:00 AM
eve thank you so kindly dear friend wonderful comment bless you
Date: 11/21/2014 8:14:00 PM
This is a very enchanting and most beautiful masterpiece of a terza Rima that you two guys have created here. Excellent collaboration Liam between you and my dear friend Gary! Keep your magical golden pens writting! A 7 for each of you! :) Love and hugs! xxxx D.
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 11/22/2014 2:40:00 PM
your so sweet dorian wonderful comment yeah the leprechaun pops out of a bottle now and again to gary lol smiling pal thank you kindly dear friend deeply appreciated

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