Dreaming of Love 2

Another day dies as I sit in a fallow field and watch 
my dream sprouting among the wild verdant weeds.
The silence of the valley is soon broken as evening
approaches and birds take their last flight.
 
A breeze passes by making the wild jonquils dance,
as the night deepens and darkness intensifies.
Still I dream my nightmare, persistently repetitive,
unending, heart throbbing, painful and agonizing.
 
The dew impregnates the air, now I feel cold, 
breathless and solitary, except for my dream
and the dark skies fill with starry glow worms.
 
A coyote howls from afar, as on the ridge I hear a rumbling,
a storm is gathering. I never had the courage
to climb and explore the ridge.  I know you will be there,
lovely, dark tresses, pale face, abyssal seeing eyes. 
 
Oh, once I tried, but never made it. The uneven terrain alien,
the rocks sharp and killing and the irrational fear of heights.
The thread of my life seems to be ending.  I lost her forever.

Who knows, perhaps it's fear I might find you waiting there, 
all ravishing and serene.  So, I stay on the plain and dream of you.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Daniel Avatar
October 11, 2020 at 12:49 AM
So exquisitely written, you amaze me with your love dreams, Victor:)
Crabtree Avatar
October 10, 2020 at 11:40 AM
Never stop dreaming... :) ~Angie
Proxenos Avatar
October 10, 2020 at 10:06 AM
Your dream is so real, vivid in imagery and a delight to read. Wonderful poem dear Victor. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
Allison Avatar
October 9, 2020 at 11:15 PM
such striking imagery Victor, rarely remember my dreams ... dream on and continue thrilling us with your poetry:-) hugs jan xx
Bayles Avatar
October 9, 2020 at 3:51 PM
This is a wonderful poem. The imagery is vivid, the language and emotion strong.
Rodrigues Avatar
October 9, 2020 at 2:03 PM
Love the highlight of the flowers and storms. Always lovely detail from you, my friend!
Dietrich Avatar
October 9, 2020 at 9:09 AM
So poignant and well expressed, Victor. A really good one from you.
Mcintosh Avatar
October 9, 2020 at 5:32 AM
Interesting and thought provoking.. Is it fear you might see? Just my impression. This is deeply moving and articulate. Love and prayers and blessings, Gina
Rose  Avatar
October 9, 2020 at 5:18 AM
No greater dream then the dream of love, one day you will wake up in her arms for the beg reunion. Have a good day dear friend.
Buehler Avatar
October 8, 2020 at 10:17 PM
Love has its beginning as a dream, which stays real as long as you believe. A beautifully described love poem, Victor. :)
Nicole Avatar
October 8, 2020 at 8:28 PM
In dreams, anything is possible. Keep reaching beyond the stars- for she is there waiting to take your hand. Your thoughts caress softly around me and my heart. Hugs, Brandy
Fowler Avatar
October 8, 2020 at 1:50 PM
A beautifully penned work Victor. Our dreams are often our safest havens. Linda
Crabtree Avatar
October 8, 2020 at 7:55 AM
Without dreams, we have little to look forward to. ...I'm afraid of heights, also :) ~Angie
One Avatar
October 8, 2020 at 6:31 AM
Never stop dreaming my friend... Its a temporary, but beautiful reminder..
Andresen Avatar
October 8, 2020 at 5:18 AM
- Dreams and signs from heaven ... our hidden desires and needs come to light ... a beautiful poem, Victor :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Pandit Avatar
October 8, 2020 at 5:09 AM
Enjoyed the read, Victor, immersed in your love story. You always paint exquisite details to bring the scene alive. And she makes an impression that lasts--in this evocative write.
Cunningham Avatar
October 8, 2020 at 2:46 AM
We've all had those dreams of longing for love, sadly some times it escapes us. Love the imagery in your verse Victor Tom
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