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Dreaming of Creamsicle

Dreaming of creamsicle vanilla and orange swirls My tongue is swimming, diving into the delectable spoonfuls of tangoing flavors of joy-bursting “ahh.” Better yet - creamsicle milkshake, that goes straight to the mind with “oohs” and “ahhs.” It’s only a dream. A tribute. Only one spoonful - it, sits on my tongue, cold and dangerous, then the current takes it in like a sin. Sinful not to lavish one bite. 10/11/2022
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Nicholsen Avatar
October 15, 2022 at 8:06 AM
cool write enjoyed ..
Rodrigues Avatar
October 15, 2022 at 6:21 PM
Thank you, Yolanda!
Buhagiar Avatar
October 11, 2022 at 10:31 AM
So long as you don't overdo it, ice cream is delicious.
Rodrigues Avatar
October 11, 2022 at 1:47 PM
I’m doing good! :)
Kyser Avatar
October 11, 2022 at 10:13 AM
Two words: persimmon ice cream. Oh, wait... enjoyed!
Rodrigues Avatar
October 11, 2022 at 1:47 PM
LOL! …so persimmon ice cream, haven’t heard of it.I was reading it has a butterscotch like flavor…now I want some! :)
DiMino Avatar
October 11, 2022 at 8:45 AM
Outstanding Poetry! Beautiful expressions. I think most things in moderation are alright, at least, are necessary for health of the human psyche. You get a Fav!
Rodrigues Avatar
October 11, 2022 at 9:01 AM
I totally agree…a bite can be delightful! Thank you for the fave! :)
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