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Dreaming of creamsicle vanilla and orange swirls My tongue is swimming, diving into the delectable spoonfuls of tangoing flavors of joy-bursting “ahh.” Better yet - creamsicle milkshake, that goes straight to the mind with “oohs” and “ahhs.” It’s only a dream. A tribute. Only one spoonful - it, sits on my tongue, cold and dangerous, then the current takes it in like a sin. Sinful not to lavish one bite. 10/11/2022

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Date: 10/15/2022 8:06:00 AM
cool write enjoyed ..
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/15/2022 6:21:00 PM
Thank you, Yolanda!
Date: 10/11/2022 10:31:00 AM
So long as you don't overdo it, ice cream is delicious.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/11/2022 1:47:00 PM
I’m doing good! :)
Date: 10/11/2022 10:13:00 AM
Two words: persimmon ice cream. Oh, wait... enjoyed!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/11/2022 1:47:00 PM
LOL! …so persimmon ice cream, haven’t heard of it.I was reading it has a butterscotch like flavor…now I want some! :)
Date: 10/11/2022 8:45:00 AM
Outstanding Poetry! Beautiful expressions. I think most things in moderation are alright, at least, are necessary for health of the human psyche. You get a Fav!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/11/2022 9:01:00 AM
I totally agree…a bite can be delightful! Thank you for the fave! :)

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