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Dreaming In Rhymes

In the rain I see clear...
Through the clouds I can hear...

Behind a wall I can write...
Scribing words in the night...

Moonlight shines on every line...
Sunrise brings the final rhyme...

See the world in my view...
From dreams to words it all grew...

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Debbie Duncan

Date: 9/3/2013 12:34:00 PM

Love it Michael ;} you have an awesome day ;}

Sukmawati Komala

Date: 12/24/2012 9:47:00 PM

a very very awesome write Michael,,, enjoyed your poem this morning..wishing you and Rosanna have a merry merry christmas :) pls send my luv and hugs to your family :) <3<3<3

Joe Maverick

Date: 12/15/2012 10:51:00 AM

A very good vision Michael; Truly enjoyed today.."

Kerry Singleton

Date: 12/12/2012 5:05:00 PM

Had to Fav this one :)

Kerry Singleton

Date: 12/12/2012 5:04:00 PM

Oh Wow!! Love this one :) Can totally relate!

Len Gasun

Date: 12/12/2012 10:09:00 AM

This is another superbly wonderful piece of yours my dear friend, Michael. I love every line especially the sixth one! Thank you so much for sharing and your precious time stopping by leaving again a very wonderful comment on my latest poem! All the best! love/hugs, Leonora

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 12/9/2012 7:50:00 AM

sharing your dreams and words of inspiration luv .. visualizing u with pen in hand as thoughts emerge onto blank page to entertain our eyes and feed our souls Michael .. and rhyme is my fav form of poetry so your JG is in Heaven reading this one .. enjoy your day with luv ..across GW ..xoxo forever

Holly Moore

Date: 12/9/2012 2:31:00 AM

I love this poem..I can relate to it. Especially "sunrise brings the final rhyme". I really like it...Thanks for your comments..Hugs, Holly

Debra Falgout

Date: 12/8/2012 11:02:00 PM

Love the key elements in your poem, from mind, dreams to poem, so important to share our thoughts because it can be a open door to someone else who may need to hear just that to get them through a day or even save a life, Much Love, Debra

Juli- Michelle

Date: 12/8/2012 10:12:00 PM

I love the simplicity yet complexity of your words. Rhyme is a big portion of my thoughts :) i love how this emanates the poet's mindset .. well enjoyed, -JuliMichelle

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/8/2012 7:48:00 PM

Michael, my dear friend... i love the way it is an never ending poem with you. Thank you for the way you created a vivid cascade of words in my mind through your poem, Well done! keep the pen flowing and the images growing... :-) good night PD

S.Jagathsimhan Nair

Date: 12/8/2012 6:36:00 PM

Cute and sweet poetry, enjoyed very much, Michael!! Jag

Yanny Widjanarko

Date: 12/8/2012 5:51:00 PM

Beautiful, I fell in love with your verses Michael they are so gorgeous, thank you for all of your supports thorugh my pages, They made my days :)

Jacob Cra

Date: 12/8/2012 1:18:00 PM

Wow, this poem is spectacular, by far one of my favorites I have ever read (and I'm not just saying that). Is it published or what? It's really good, and you are extremely talented... I've read some of your other poems as well. You should visit my site: poeticpossibilities.tk ! I think this poem could have a really good chance of winning one of our contests! Wish you the best with your poetry and I hope you get published! : )Jacob Cramer

Eileen Manassian

Date: 12/8/2012 12:21:00 PM

I LOVE IT! :) I know exactly how it feels to be overwhelmed with the need to write. It's like oxygen for me. Lovely poem! Blessings!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/8/2012 12:17:00 PM

love this one, Michael. the organization of each couplet, it's so nice.

David Williams

Date: 12/8/2012 12:17:00 PM

Michael now this is the sign of a good poet, these words just flow off the page, I like a lot....hope you are having a peaceful weekend my friend...David

Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/8/2012 12:00:00 PM

I have had similar nights..Great work that has come out of the sleepless time..Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Sara

Russell Sivey

Date: 12/8/2012 11:49:00 AM

This is an ultimately beautiful and wondrous write my friend! I truly am enlightened at the delightful way you portray this incredible poem Michael! Your piece is amazing, a perfectly lovely dream piece this one is! You have written a magnificent write, Great Work!!