Dreaming About You

Her mind
Reveling like
A sea of glass
As a crystal

Pondering
As deep as a well
With a satire way
About her, with

A touch of
Babylon
Love dwelling with
Irresistible ways

Sassy speech with
Spirited walk
Eyes rich and deep 
Blue as the ocean

As two, two carat
Diamonds sparkling
Lips a deep ruby red
Body UN-describable

As I awake from the passed
She stands in front of me
Aged in years gray hair
Unchanged through my eyes   

(Fiction mine split long ago lol)
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019


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Date: 11/2/2019 2:14:00 PM
Hi Bobby, So you were dreaming about me ? In all seriousness this is well written poem. To have a love this would be amazing. I agree with Sandra, great last line:-) Alexis
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Bobby May
Date: 11/2/2019 2:40:00 PM
LOL, Yep!!! to funny my sweet friend
Date: 11/2/2019 7:47:00 AM
you really need to stop this now... hahaha.. just kidding... nice poem.. of course, I am not a shee either...
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Bobby May
Date: 11/2/2019 7:53:00 AM
LOL, you do have a sense of humor my friend, almost as good as W.W. Thank you once more!!
Date: 11/2/2019 7:42:00 AM
beautiful penning Bobby...you describe her well, love the end...age should not distance love, age should strengthen it in my opinion...well at least how my mind views love... hugs
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Bobby May
Date: 11/2/2019 7:54:00 AM
Thank you Sandra!!
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