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Dreaming

I'm lying here thinking of you, Dear. Thinking and dreaming of us two near, Feeling my skin turn red, Lying alone in my bed, Imagining what it would be like to be yours for a night. How can I feel such passion for someone of your fashion? Far away and out of sight, your strength touches me in the night. Dreaming of lips pressing mine and hoping we don't run out of time.
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Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 11/12/2016 1:08:00 PM
nice, i feel such passion, sweet
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Carole Duet
Date: 11/13/2016 4:17:00 PM
Thanks for reading, Edward, and for your comment.
Date: 10/5/2016 6:36:00 PM
Hello Carole I just finished reading your poetry and I enjoyed it. Well done.
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Carole Duet
Date: 10/6/2016 1:16:00 AM
Thank you, Darlene. I'm so glad you enjoyed itl
Date: 9/29/2016 8:17:00 PM
I learn more from every poem I read, and this is no exception, I genuinely love your work. /|\
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Carole Duet
Date: 9/30/2016 8:01:00 PM
Thank you so very much, Rick. I truly appreciate all your support. :-)
Date: 9/23/2016 3:29:00 PM
a beautiful romantic dream Carole:-) hugs jan xx
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Carole Duet
Date: 9/28/2016 2:35:00 AM
Yes, thank you, Jan. Hugs back...ooo
Date: 9/21/2016 11:04:00 PM
I dream of someone who dreams as you! Lovely poem!
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Carole Duet
Date: 9/23/2016 2:54:00 PM
Lol...tks Arthur
Date: 9/21/2016 8:19:00 PM
Another romantic write, Carole. Must have been some daydream:)
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Carole Duet
Date: 9/23/2016 2:56:00 PM
It was! Tks Daniel. Btw...I changed the title..

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