Debbie Duncan Poet Free verse

Dreaming

I sat up in my bed 
From the dream in my head
Thought I saw a unicorn prancing by
As I watched hummingbirds flutter nearby
I felt the ladybugs land on my head
It was a happy day for sure, as I found laughter 
 in my head.



That mean old mama,,,, she treats you like an old shoe,,,, I treat you like a rose in my heart!

11am  3/2/ 2013
I wrote the dreaming one this morning, my six yr old g-daughter stated the other one to me last night, Londyn thought her mom, my daughter was coming home after work, though she went to office B-Day party, that's why Londyn said that,,,, so I'm giving her credit.

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Don Johnson March 12, 2013 at 2:13 AM just a bit of rhyme and flow, well done here toe by toe :) well done ....

Harry Horsman March 7, 2013 at 3:30 PM wonderful and inspiring Debbie Debbie Duncan March 10, 2013 at 5:31 PM Thank you harry ;}

Keith Bickerstaffe March 7, 2013 at 10:59 AM So sweet and endearing! A hug for you and your darling granddaughter for this magical poem. Keith Debbie Duncan March 10, 2013 at 5:30 PM Thank you ;}

Susan Palli March 5, 2013 at 12:45 AM Nice one!

Andrea Dietrich March 4, 2013 at 11:32 PM oh yes, what you said about your haiku. Please don't be afraid to post modern haiku. 5/7/5 is actually less acceptable these days. I for one almost prefer to see the other kind!! Debbie Duncan March 5, 2013 at 12:39 AM I will ;}

Andrea Dietrich March 4, 2013 at 11:31 PM this is adorable and including your daughter that way!! hmmm, I was gonna tell you something. Let me go back to the comment you made to me. Maybe it had something to do with that. If not, I guess I forgot what I meant to tell you!! Debbie Duncan March 5, 2013 at 12:38 AM Thanks for reading ;}

Sukmawati Komala March 4, 2013 at 9:06 AM impressive write sweet Debbie..like it so much :) <3 Sk

Ravi Sathasivam March 4, 2013 at 5:51 AM Excellent write with lovely words. Enjoyed reading it. Tfs Debbie Duncan March 4, 2013 at 7:15 PM ;}

Sara Kendrick March 4, 2013 at 4:25 AM Interesting dream...Thanks for stopping by..Sara Debbie Duncan March 4, 2013 at 7:13 PM ;}

Anthony Nutter March 3, 2013 at 6:19 PM A wonderful write, loved it

Anne-Lise Andresen March 3, 2013 at 12:15 PM Small and large poets .... makes a very good job! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :) Debbie Duncan March 3, 2013 at 5:44 PM Thank you Anne ;}

David Williams March 3, 2013 at 4:51 AM Debbie excellent words from both of you...David Debbie Duncan March 3, 2013 at 5:44 PM Thank you David ;}

Duke Beaufort March 2, 2013 at 6:59 PM You have a very kind heart which is the genesis of "dreaming". Have many happy days in this wonderful world since you are blessed with a beautiful grand daughter. Debbie Duncan March 2, 2013 at 7:15 PM Thank you Duke ;}

Donna Jones March 2, 2013 at 4:46 PM Sounds like there are two poets in the family...very sweet :-) :-) Debbie Duncan March 2, 2013 at 5:19 PM Thank you Donna ;}