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Dreaming

I sat up in my bed From the dream in my head Thought I saw a unicorn prancing by As I watched hummingbirds flutter nearby I felt the ladybugs land on my head It was a happy day for sure, as I found laughter in my head. That mean old mama,,,, she treats you like an old shoe,,,, I treat you like a rose in my heart! 11am 3/2/ 2013 I wrote the dreaming one this morning, my six yr old g-daughter stated the other one to me last night, Londyn thought her mom, my daughter was coming home after work, though she went to office B-Day party, that's why Londyn said that,,,, so I'm giving her credit.

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Date: 3/12/2013 2:13:00 AM
just a bit of rhyme and flow, well done here toe by toe :) well done ....
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Date: 3/10/2013 2:51:00 PM
Really precious poem, I love it :)
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Debbie Duncan
Date: 3/10/2013 5:31:00 PM
Thank you Anne ;}
Date: 3/7/2013 3:30:00 PM
wonderful and inspiring Debbie
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Debbie Duncan
Date: 3/10/2013 5:31:00 PM
Thank you harry ;}
Date: 3/7/2013 10:59:00 AM
So sweet and endearing! A hug for you and your darling granddaughter for this magical poem. Keith
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Debbie Duncan
Date: 3/10/2013 5:30:00 PM
Thank you ;}
Date: 3/5/2013 12:45:00 AM
Nice one!
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Date: 3/4/2013 11:32:00 PM
oh yes, what you said about your haiku. Please don't be afraid to post modern haiku. 5/7/5 is actually less acceptable these days. I for one almost prefer to see the other kind!!
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Debbie Duncan
Date: 3/5/2013 12:39:00 AM
I will ;}
Date: 3/4/2013 11:31:00 PM
this is adorable and including your daughter that way!! hmmm, I was gonna tell you something. Let me go back to the comment you made to me. Maybe it had something to do with that. If not, I guess I forgot what I meant to tell you!!
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Debbie Duncan
Date: 3/5/2013 12:38:00 AM
Thanks for reading ;}
Date: 3/4/2013 9:06:00 AM
impressive write sweet Debbie..like it so much :) <3 Sk
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Date: 3/4/2013 5:51:00 AM
Excellent write with lovely words. Enjoyed reading it. Tfs
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Debbie Duncan
Date: 3/4/2013 7:15:00 PM
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Date: 3/4/2013 4:25:00 AM
Interesting dream...Thanks for stopping by..Sara
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Debbie Duncan
Date: 3/4/2013 7:13:00 PM
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Date: 3/3/2013 6:19:00 PM
A wonderful write, loved it
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Date: 3/3/2013 12:15:00 PM
Small and large poets .... makes a very good job! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Debbie Duncan
Date: 3/3/2013 5:44:00 PM
Thank you Anne ;}
Date: 3/3/2013 4:51:00 AM
Debbie excellent words from both of you...David
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Debbie Duncan
Date: 3/3/2013 5:44:00 PM
Thank you David ;}
Date: 3/2/2013 6:59:00 PM
You have a very kind heart which is the genesis of "dreaming". Have many happy days in this wonderful world since you are blessed with a beautiful grand daughter.
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Debbie Duncan
Date: 3/2/2013 7:15:00 PM
Thank you Duke ;}
Date: 3/2/2013 4:46:00 PM
Sounds like there are two poets in the family...very sweet :-) :-)
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Debbie Duncan
Date: 3/2/2013 5:19:00 PM
Thank you Donna ;}