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Dreaming

Pain, love, confusion Thoughts twisted in her head Troubled times, troubled years What lies for her ahead? Her children, her past Race through her mind Struggling, fighting All at once she is blind A pause, her head is clear Oddly, the same her hand She looks about, so beautiful What is this Perfect Land? Clarity becomes her She sees those she’s loved Visions include one’s below As well as one’s above The sadness seen below Makes her turn toward The Light No suffering remains She is with God tonight

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 3/28/2011 4:32:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Deborah. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. Enter and enjoy some of the contests and I wish you the best in them. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/26/2011 6:44:00 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. enjoyed reading your creative write tonight.. hope your time on P.S. will be fun and filled with sharing with luv.. our contests are free so please check them out and good luck luv..
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Date: 3/26/2011 4:23:00 AM
Very nice piece... Your words touch the reader in many ways... always Michael....btw welcome to the Soup...
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