Dreaming

Pain, love, confusion
Thoughts twisted in her head
Troubled times, troubled years
What lies for her ahead?

Her children, her past
Race through her mind
Struggling, fighting
All at once she is blind

A pause, her head is clear
Oddly, the same her hand
She looks about, so beautiful
What is this Perfect Land?

Clarity becomes her
She sees those she’s loved
Visions include one’s below
As well as one’s above

The sadness seen below
Makes her turn toward The Light
No suffering remains
She is with God tonight

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 3/28/2011 4:32:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Deborah. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. Enter and enjoy some of the contests and I wish you the best in them. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/26/2011 6:44:00 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. enjoyed reading your creative write tonight.. hope your time on P.S. will be fun and filled with sharing with luv.. our contests are free so please check them out and good luck luv..
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Date: 3/26/2011 4:23:00 AM
Very nice piece... Your words touch the reader in many ways... always Michael....btw welcome to the Soup...
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