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Dreamer Love

What can I give you? 
you possess everything
in the palm of your hand
look at the stars
how they shine for you
the moon and bloom
when you walk in
my heart went "Boom!"

what can I give you? 
start your quest now. 
take it slow, slow, slow 
deeper trust is defined.
know the way to design
it will be yours and mine. 
I cherish you most. 
Unlike others, a clever host.

What can I give you? 
besides words, 
I don't have a thing
after your tears dry
take me to your heart 
for it's there that I belong
I'd give heaven to hold you
I yell it into oblivion
there is a cheery delirium.
 
what can I give you?
I'll take them both as true
my heartbeat is just for you 
record-breaking heat
on the stand or in the street 
doesn’t need a drum or beat
If you slip, I will grab you
Oh! How sweet is love?

What can I give you? 
pure, pure sweetness
a pure star breeze croons
a tune that is pure and cool
love is all you want
I can give you some
thus, you must feel me
lust in the world's embrace
where love has left its trace.

Written: October 15, 2022

Inspired By A Song - 
Once There Was A Love Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: JCB Brul
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022


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Date: 10/19/2022 9:50:00 AM
Passionate poem of a lasting love. Thanks for sharing, Lasaad, and good luck in the contest, my friend. Bill
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Date: 10/16/2022 6:10:00 AM
Love always leaves it mark. Wonderfully reminiscing poem my friend. Best to you.
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