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What can I give you?  you possess everything in the palm of your hand look at the stars how they shine for you the moon and bloom when you walk in my heart went "Boom!" what can I give you?  start your quest now.  take it slow, slow, slow  deeper trust is defined. know the way to design it will be yours and mine.  I cherish you most.  Unlike others, a clever host. What can I give you?  besides words,  I don't have a thing after your tears dry take me to your heart  for it's there that I belong I'd give heaven to hold you I yell it into oblivion there is a cheery delirium.   what can I give you? I'll take them both as true my heartbeat is just for you  record-breaking heat on the stand or in the street  doesn’t need a drum or beat If you slip, I will grab you Oh! How sweet is love? What can I give you?  pure, pure sweetness a pure star breeze croons a tune that is pure and cool love is all you want I can give you some thus, you must feel me lust in the world's embrace where love has left its trace. Written: October 15, 2022 Inspired By A Song - Once There Was A Love Poetry Contest Sponsored by: JCB Brul

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Date: 10/19/2022 9:50:00 AM
Passionate poem of a lasting love. Thanks for sharing, Lasaad, and good luck in the contest, my friend. Bill
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Date: 10/16/2022 6:10:00 AM
Love always leaves it mark. Wonderfully reminiscing poem my friend. Best to you.
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