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Dreamed September Wishes

~ The heavens sing in star dust whispers beneath the moon’s enchanted smile While hand in hand we slowly wander past sycamores in autumn style The breeze is cool this path a’ winding so fresh the scent of twilight bliss Enchanted moments come this season in shadows dim I steal a kiss Of lips divine in endless wonder my heart it beats a rapid pace Your skin as soft as jasmine petals embroidered in a springtime lace To hold you close this shimmered evening below these velvet skies above Is all my dreamed September wishes coming true with you in love ~

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Brenda Chiri

Date: 10/1/2019 2:34:00 PM

Such s gorgeous write my dear friend! A smile spreads across my face reading the beauty of it! And a warm feeling fills my being!;)

Chris Green
Date: 10/1/2019 2:40:00 PM

Thank you my friend. I am happy if this made you smile and feel warm inside. As always, your kindness is my smile.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/1/2019 3:31:00 AM

- Beautiful poem, Chris ... (as always) - I especially love the third verse ... it's a romantic gem - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Chris Green
Date: 10/1/2019 7:36:00 AM

Thank you so very much Anne-Lise. I appreciate you my friend.

Eileen Manassian

Date: 10/1/2019 2:00:00 AM

Oh dear....how sweet, how romantic, how delightful. This piece had my heart sighing in wonder. Thanks for your visit to my latest, Chris, and thanks for this beauty you'e shared.

Chris Green
Date: 10/1/2019 7:35:00 AM

Thank you so very much Eileen for your always kind comments on my work.

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 9/30/2019 10:35:00 PM

This is a beauty and deserves recognition. Why don't you submit it somewhere? I know not where. Bless you always

Chris Green
Date: 10/1/2019 7:35:00 AM

Thank you Regina, I appreciate your kind comment and suggestion but like you, I have no idea where except right here where you would find it.

Hello There

Date: 9/30/2019 10:20:00 PM

A beautiful piece, indeed ~ wonderfully romantic with a kiss sublime...

Chris Green
Date: 10/1/2019 7:34:00 AM

Thank you my friend. Your kind words are always a smile for me.

Debra Squyres

Date: 9/30/2019 7:52:00 PM

“Embroidered in a springtime lace”.. what a visual that evokes. Sensually pleasing and romantic.. very much an “ahhhhh” poem.

Chris Green
Date: 10/1/2019 7:34:00 AM

Thank you for your kindness Debra. I am thrilled you liked this one.

Sandra Adams

Date: 9/30/2019 6:32:00 PM

Gorgeous words to close both the evening and september...you pen romantic verses better than anyone can, i always lose myself and float away in your words....I love the whispers of your muse throughout this one ..it shines like you my friend! :) hugs

Chris Green
Date: 10/1/2019 7:33:00 AM

What a nice thing to say, you are far too kind to me my friend. I appreciate your visits and wonderful comments that greet me each day.

Heidi Sands

Date: 9/30/2019 5:41:00 PM

This is so nice to read today. Another favorite. Beautiful Chris! I love it :)

Chris Green
Date: 10/1/2019 7:33:00 AM

Thank you so much Heidi. I am happy you stopped by.