Michael J. Falotico Poet Rhyme

Dreamed In Colors

I closed my eyes tonight and dreamed up high..
I rode the milky way above all the unpainted rainbows that didn't cry..
I saw black and white lines so perfectly drawn..
I circled the moon so many times not to miss a view before dawn..
All at once beauty could not be withheld anymore..
And then hands from so high above colored it all with one roar..
I then leaped forward and rode a rainbow back home in peace..
Back to my world where I know there are colors when I sleep..


~Brian's Contest 1-8~

by Michael J Falotico

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Dinda Minardi July 1, 2011 at 8:34 AM This is fun, Michael... I love how you described your dream here, beautiful... I'd like a dream like that :)

Jeff Morehead June 27, 2011 at 1:37 PM Great write Michael, I loved it. Jeff

Nette Onclaud June 27, 2011 at 10:49 AM a beauty to behold, michael... you paint lines with colorful thoughts! high, high points for you in the contest..:) huggs, nette

Linda-Marie Sweetheart June 27, 2011 at 4:53 AM Michael I have posted "CHERISH" ..our collaboration.. hope u like the way I wrote to present the emphatic lines luv.. why don't u post it too when u have a moment luv.... thankxx for being a collaborator with me and blending our talents and words so well together luv.. your Jersey Girl says thankxx to her White Knight ..of PS..

June 26, 2011 at 5:43 PM Beautifully written Michael, enjoyed the ride with you, good luck in the contest, Love Alexa

Linda-Marie Sweetheart June 26, 2011 at 4:23 PM rainbow delight and delightful poetry my W.K. of P.S. with a brilliant array of flowing pictures painted with your creative pen luv.. your Jersey Girl always and forever taking the ride with u in drealand luv.. oh..wow..

Renee Kelly June 26, 2011 at 3:41 PM Beautiful! Good luck in the contest :)

Andrea Dietrich June 26, 2011 at 3:17 PM wow, this is splendid, Michael. I was just getting ready to go off when I saw your note to me. Good luck in the contest. I didn't make it in his last one and a few others too.haha. so did you have the rotater cuff thing? Mine is a bone spur. Luv, andrea

Jay O'Neal June 26, 2011 at 3:15 PM Very nice! I love this piece...

Sarah Hales June 26, 2011 at 2:48 PM Enjoyed the dream x

Mourning Mist June 26, 2011 at 2:09 PM you mentioned eternal love, but then called an atheists poem profound..so i was lost..I am assuming you are not a believer or christian because that is frowned down upon, the Lord dismisses that Michael J. Falotico June 26, 2011 at 2:14 PM Its poetry, as poet playing with words.. My thoughts my dreams... If your insulted on any level, don't read... I brought up Catholic and still do live my life that way...

Mourning Mist June 26, 2011 at 2:08 PM good poem..confused though he spoke of eternal love..but then called an atheists poem profound, so I am assuming you do not believe in God to support atheist views then? I would imagine not hehe..the Lord would dimiss you alone for that Michael J. Falotico June 26, 2011 at 2:48 PM Now I get double comments??? Really , If you believe in God , then you should know that everyone is equal and treated so , live as you preach my friend... one more and your blocked....