Dream World

Yes, I saw ice flaming in the angry sun;
smoke was oozing out of it!

I felt heat in the north pole,
while fishing!

I swear it, I heard a seal
telling me "good morning"!

Can you believe I also tasted
light from a candle flame?!

Reality had exchanged places
with fantasy for a moment....
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Dunn Avatar
January 7, 2014 at 1:40 PM
Thank you for your wonderful commments on writes enjoyed the write above i like to fish but not to take the fish off the hook lol it's sound cold your scense. cheri
Kimathi Avatar
January 7, 2014 at 11:53 PM
Welcome Cherl. Hehehe. That is some fishing :0
Kithinji Avatar
December 30, 2013 at 2:39 AM
A great way to close the year--- still writing poems.
Kimathi Avatar
December 30, 2013 at 5:42 AM
Yes indeed, a poem to lighten up the air before the year closes. Have a blessed New Year!!!! :-)
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