DREAM SUSTAINED FRIENDSHIP

Dedicated to Lorie Jean, Though She'll Never Know
Asleep, I cannot escape my love’s depth for you. Awake, I cannot deny my loathing towards you. Confusion and missing settle-stay in my pain’s cliché. Thoughts of you weigh down my moments every day. Long is the time I have spilled grief yet failed its release, but dreams weave my joy strung to net grief’s relief. Asleep, I see us blend as we did easily back then. As before, we pool play, float happily and swim. In sunshine, we decide our age will be just ten as laughter splashes our feel with child-like appeal. In dreams, we cook, play cards, take road trips, critique movies, compete to title older song hits. Our laughter soars until you ‘ink’, and then we laugh more, stopping only when laugh sore. Secrets from one’s lips merit the other’s ears to heart-hear and hold all told in love-lined folds. My feet twitch as I dream-walk to your home and street-met you dream-walking to my own. In dreams I see all I reality-miss; your face, voice, moods, humor and unique attitudes. I live our togetherness, our special groove, in cherished dream scenes of us as still a two. As soon as I first wake, reality steals my happy, smashes the contentment dreams grant me while missing aches swirl colors of lonely. I ponder whether while in your own slumber, you also dream plunder from our past splendor for assistance with your friend-grief ender.
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Dietrich Avatar
May 13, 2019 at 4:03 PM
should have done that the first time!
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May 13, 2019 at 4:03 PM
Dear Caycay, it's horrible when a good friend abandons you. I have had it happen several times to me, and once in a horrible fashion as you describe here. How funny. I was reading the first part, thinking it was your actual "entry" and then saw you had put your "explanation"above your poem and not below it. I love this. A FAVE. We both got third place instead of HM this time.Whoo Hoo.
Marcum Wong Avatar
May 13, 2019 at 4:38 AM
I am back to congratulate you on this winning gem CayCay! Kids have gone home when you want to visit. Hugs, Connie xxoo
Carmack Avatar
May 12, 2019 at 11:27 AM
I liked the back story and the poem. Lorie was your soul twin. I am glad your anger resolved for it often holds up too many people for way too long. Congrats on your win CayCay.
Lamoureux Avatar
May 12, 2019 at 9:26 AM
I enjoyed both the poem and your narrative. Congrats on your placement in my contest.
Breedt Avatar
February 2, 2018 at 10:11 PM
I crave this. I love this. This is when you come into your own. Its set apart from others,different and superb.
Wigley Avatar
January 25, 2018 at 1:45 AM
I do love this, CayCay, on so many levels. A fave for me, thanks. Viv x
Marcum Wong Avatar
January 24, 2018 at 3:23 AM
I have a different perspective about this poem after reading your answer to Andrea's question. This is a poignant heartfelt poem CayCay, beautifully created! : )
Gentile Avatar
January 22, 2018 at 1:06 PM
A very interesting concept, Caycay. I do believe that dreams are part of a common subconscious that we all share. Perhaps, she will share this and things will change. Good Luck in the contest, great poem xxoo
Lamoureux Avatar
January 21, 2018 at 10:19 AM
One of your best, exceptional poetry Ca Cay. You should be proud of this stunning emotionally gripping piece.
Gondolf Avatar
January 21, 2018 at 6:57 AM
CayCay, this is such a unique take on dreams and so well put together. It should do very well in the contest. You are such a talented writer. John
Dietrich Avatar
January 20, 2018 at 8:36 PM
Amazing title for this!
Dietrich Avatar
January 20, 2018 at 8:35 PM
Gosh, your unique phrasings work really well in this one, Caycay , with the topic of dreams. This is one of the better ones I have seen on dreams and I love the perspective you took on them. I kept going back and forth between thinking, is she dreaming of an old friend from childhood or of her man?? I guess since my man does not enter into many of my dreams, that is why I am curious to know if yours does. I know you wish you had known him when he was young. Is it him?
Godwin Avatar
January 21, 2018 at 9:06 AM
Do you remember our message conversation about my friend, Lorie? This is about her and the feelings our breakup left me to filter through. In my dreams, Lorie and I are still Thelma and Louise (as people once called us.) After contest concludes, I will probably dedicate this to Lorie Jean though she'll never know. Love ya ... CayCay
Dietrich Avatar
January 20, 2018 at 8:32 PM
oh caycay, I get such a kick out of the comments you leave me. I have maybe ten comments left to reply to but I am stopping with YOU so I can get to my other duties. Let me read this one and also one other. I see you have been writing some more poems and that pleases me so much!!
Smith Avatar
January 20, 2018 at 12:07 PM
Terrific write CayCay, best wishes in the contest...
Tripp Avatar
January 20, 2018 at 11:06 AM
CayCay! I have marked this a FAV! I am in utter awe and amazement. It is the most well put together, emotionally descriptive poem I've ever read. Extreme talent here!
Godwin Avatar
January 20, 2018 at 12:05 PM
Your comment has accelerated my adrenaline and heartbeat; I'm being totally honest, well, always aim for that, but this is a revealing 'honest' - your words served like a drug and gave me rushes, a fix for my muse. I thank you, you bursted in excitement (that's how it felt) and I love this moment. YOU wowed me. Blessings ... CayCay
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