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Dream Recollections

I have recollections
of my life's journey, thus far
the tattered pages flutter
     in my dream, like snapshots 
black and white and color, drifting- 
all the faces, and glimpses of places . . . 

And I stand trembling
as the wind takes my tangled hair
I am walking a green tree lined path
     where the birds are singing  
and I open a rusty, gate-
holding, a tear wet red rose . . .  

And I see your name
then, like wings pages are floating
oh, I want to run from this place
      for the weeping is so loud 
it is breaking my heart- 
turn, turn this page for it is too 
painful . . . 

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July 19, 2016


Poetry/Free Verse/Dream Recollections
Copyright Protected, ID 16-1092-482-0
All Rights Reserved.  Written under Pseudonym.


Submitted to Standard Contest 525
sponsor, Brian Strand

First Place
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

Poem

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La France Avatar
December 12, 2018 at 4:42 AM
Thank you Line for the congratulations and Carolyn for that great comment, compliment and congratulations, appreciate ~
Gauthier Avatar
December 10, 2018 at 7:35 PM
Congrats on your top win, Constance. Well penned.
La France Avatar
December 12, 2018 at 4:41 AM
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Devonshire Avatar
December 10, 2018 at 9:55 AM
You have a gift for creating scenes that touch the reader's heart and characters we come to love. Congratulations on your win in Brian's contest! Hugs, Carolyn
La France Avatar
December 12, 2018 at 4:41 AM
Hugs !!!
La France Avatar
December 10, 2018 at 8:34 AM
John, thanks so much for visiting with that great comment and congrats ~
Gondolf Avatar
December 9, 2018 at 8:51 PM
I can feel the deep emotion in your poem, Constance, I am left with a lump in by throat. Congrats on your win. John
La France Avatar
December 10, 2018 at 8:34 AM
Tears ~
La France Avatar
December 8, 2018 at 9:57 AM
Thank you Kim, Connie, and Chris for visiting my poem with those great comments, appreciate a lot ~
Green Avatar
December 7, 2018 at 8:17 AM
Wow, once again I am mesmerized and literally a bit teary eyed as I read this today. Your poetry is always such a gift for my eyes, my heart and my mind. Really nice my friend. Best wishes in the contest
La France Avatar
December 8, 2018 at 9:56 AM
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Marcum Wong Avatar
December 7, 2018 at 1:56 AM
Beautifully poignant Constance. Awesome imagery! : ) xxoo
La France Avatar
December 8, 2018 at 9:55 AM
xxoo!
Rodrigues Avatar
December 6, 2018 at 8:17 PM
The need to turn the page...the weeping is so awful. Such emotion. Great write!
La France Avatar
December 8, 2018 at 9:55 AM
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