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I have recollections of my life's journey, thus far the tattered pages flutter in my dream, like snapshots black and white and color, drifting- all the faces, and glimpses of places . . . And I stand trembling as the wind takes my tangled hair I am walking a green tree lined path where the birds are singing and I open a rusty, gate- holding, a tear wet red rose . . . And I see your name then, like wings pages are floating oh, I want to run from this place for the weeping is so loud it is breaking my heart- turn, turn this page for it is too painful . . . ________________________ July 19, 2016 Poetry/Free Verse/Dream Recollections Copyright Protected, ID 16-1092-482-0 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. Submitted to Standard Contest 525 sponsor, Brian Strand First Place

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Date: 12/12/2018 4:42:00 AM
Thank you Line for the congratulations and Carolyn for that great comment, compliment and congratulations, appreciate ~
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Date: 12/10/2018 7:35:00 PM
Congrats on your top win, Constance. Well penned.
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Date: 12/12/2018 4:41:00 AM
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Date: 12/10/2018 9:55:00 AM
You have a gift for creating scenes that touch the reader's heart and characters we come to love. Congratulations on your win in Brian's contest! Hugs, Carolyn
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Date: 12/12/2018 4:41:00 AM
Hugs !!!
Date: 12/10/2018 8:34:00 AM
John, thanks so much for visiting with that great comment and congrats ~
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Date: 12/9/2018 8:51:00 PM
I can feel the deep emotion in your poem, Constance, I am left with a lump in by throat. Congrats on your win. John
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Constance La France
Date: 12/10/2018 8:34:00 AM
Tears ~
Date: 12/8/2018 9:57:00 AM
Thank you Kim, Connie, and Chris for visiting my poem with those great comments, appreciate a lot ~
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Date: 12/7/2018 8:17:00 AM
Wow, once again I am mesmerized and literally a bit teary eyed as I read this today. Your poetry is always such a gift for my eyes, my heart and my mind. Really nice my friend. Best wishes in the contest
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Date: 12/8/2018 9:56:00 AM
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Date: 12/7/2018 1:56:00 AM
Beautifully poignant Constance. Awesome imagery! : ) xxoo
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Date: 12/8/2018 9:55:00 AM
xxoo!
Date: 12/6/2018 8:17:00 PM
The need to turn the page...the weeping is so awful. Such emotion. Great write!
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Date: 12/8/2018 9:55:00 AM
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