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Dream Peacefully

(form Yalto poetry) Delightful unexpected beauty an amazing dream creates yearning strong desire can not stop feeling your love though now you are not here within my heart you’re love’s retained forever so rest in peace my love. 9/3/2018 EARLY SEPT 2018 STANDARD sponsor Brian Strand.

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Date: 9/8/2018 5:46:00 PM
Wow - was not expecting that last line. Lovely, Roy. Congrats on your top win.
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Roy Pett
Date: 9/8/2018 6:09:00 PM
Thank you so much for your congratulations Line, your support is really appreciated. :))
Date: 9/4/2018 7:51:00 PM
Nice effect with the 'yalto' form, Roy. Congrats on your win in the contest. ~ Gershon
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Roy Pett
Date: 9/5/2018 9:29:00 AM
thank you so much for your congratulations Gershon, your support is really appreciated. :))
Date: 9/3/2018 9:49:00 PM
I take great pleasure in sending congratulations to you, Roy!:-) I'm so impressed you wrote this amazing poem using my form!. You nailed it!
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Roy Pett
Date: 9/4/2018 3:37:00 AM
Thank you so much for your very kind comment and congratulations Edward, I found your new form fascinating and quite challenging so really pleased to receive your approval, thanks again for your support my friend. :))
Date: 9/3/2018 5:12:00 PM
Congratulations for your win with this great poem Roy :)
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Date: 9/3/2018 5:37:00 PM
Thank you so much for your very kind comment and congratulations Heidi, thanks again for your support much appreciated my dear friend. :))

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