Dream Peacefully

(form Yalto poetry)

Delightful 
unexpected
beauty
an amazing 
dream creates yearning 
strong desire
can not
stop feeling
your love
though now you
are not here
within my heart you’re 
love’s retained forever
so
rest in peace my love.

9/3/2018
EARLY SEPT 2018 STANDARD
sponsor Brian Strand.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Gauthier Avatar
September 8, 2018 at 5:46 PM
Wow - was not expecting that last line. Lovely, Roy. Congrats on your top win.
Pett Avatar
September 8, 2018 at 6:09 PM
Thank you so much for your congratulations Line, your support is really appreciated. :))
Wolf Avatar
September 4, 2018 at 7:51 PM
Nice effect with the 'yalto' form, Roy. Congrats on your win in the contest. ~ Gershon
Pett Avatar
September 5, 2018 at 9:29 AM
thank you so much for your congratulations Gershon, your support is really appreciated. :))
Ibeh Avatar
September 3, 2018 at 9:49 PM
I take great pleasure in sending congratulations to you, Roy!:-) I'm so impressed you wrote this amazing poem using my form!. You nailed it!
Pett Avatar
September 4, 2018 at 3:37 AM
Thank you so much for your very kind comment and congratulations Edward, I found your new form fascinating and quite challenging so really pleased to receive your approval, thanks again for your support my friend. :))
Sands Avatar
September 3, 2018 at 5:12 PM
Congratulations for your win with this great poem Roy :)
Pett Avatar
September 3, 2018 at 5:37 PM
Thank you so much for your very kind comment and congratulations Heidi, thanks again for your support much appreciated my dear friend. :))
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