Frances Schiavina Poet Alliteration

Dream On Ice

Whistling through forests grey and darkening
Warning night hunters back to hiding
Wind on violin branches ice tears crying
Whipping tender limbs and stiff trunks knocking
Weak pines with roots from ground unearthing 
Whirlwind dance broken life bouncing
With snow drifts peaks and angles rounding
Walking in through cracks with ice teeth biting
While shoeless dreams on endless 
White sands with azure blue skies are running
 
First Place Winner: Brian Strand-All Yours-2/23/21
Third Place: Eve Roper-Alliteration-12/22/20

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Janice Canerdy February 24, 2021 at 7:19 AM A big CONGRATS on your well-deserved win with this creative poem, Frances. Janice

Carol Mitra February 24, 2021 at 6:07 AM W is for winning and wow too...Nicely penned dear Frances :)

Sara Kendrick December 23, 2020 at 2:13 PM What a risk taker you are to chose the letter w. Very descriptive winning work. Way to go. Sara

Jo Chamberlain December 23, 2020 at 2:12 AM Your poem is so descriptive. I really enjoyed reading it. Congratulations on your winning placement.

Beata Agustin December 22, 2020 at 10:02 PM Wow! Congrats! Cheering you amidst blest Christmas spirit, while sharing with you "... the gift of God is eternal life through Jesus Christ our Lord" (Romans 6:23 of the King James Bible). God bless you.

Eve Roper December 22, 2020 at 7:59 PM Frances, congratulations on your win. May your family celebrate an enjoyable Christmas with not only gifts, but with faith, hope and peace of the Lord. Hugs Eve Frances Schiavina December 27, 2020 at 1:46 PM Thank you Eve and may Jesus and His Holy Family also bless you and your family with His joy and sweet peace forever.