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Dream of Rapture

If I am dreaming let me dream forever
never let me wake from this sweet rapture
as I lie within your arms that hold me tender
wrapped in warmth and lost in sweet surrender
locked in eyes that show me what they're feeling
tasting wine laced kisses so appealing
as my melting heart is set on fire
the love I'm feeling fueling my desire
nothing else exists and I'm enraptured
dying a sweet death wherein I'm captured
lost within this land of never, never
if I am dreaming let me dream forever

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Date: 3/4/2009 12:57:00 PM
...."You Have A Very Blessed and Beautiful Day~My Love Always To 'You,' John!!!!"~Bye Precious Robin!!!!:))~"Beautiful Valentines Day Write!!!!~I bsolutely loved it!!!!~
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Date: 3/4/2009 12:52:00 PM
Smile~Well, you have to awaken sooner or later! But, whoms to say, that one cannot live a waking dream!?~" Hello Gifted and Precious and Beautiful Robin!!!!"~I haven't noticed any new post of Yours dear lady!? So, I truly hope that "You" are doing well!!? And, I just wanted to stop by, to let "You" know that "You Are Always With Me In My Heart and Soul, With Warmth and Sincere Love!!!!"~So, until we meet again....cont....
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Date: 2/21/2009 5:10:00 AM
wow! so beautiful, Robin... your words flow so well... what a write!! i m mesmerized!! loved all the lines and rhymes.... my fav!! ~ Arany
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Date: 2/14/2009 10:53:00 PM
Absolutely a beautiful write. Love is in the air...
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Date: 2/14/2009 4:06:00 PM
Gotta lotta catchin' up to do! Sorry to have been absent. Love and hugs, Keith
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Date: 2/14/2009 3:39:00 PM
You're right... you've come a long way. Love and hugs, Keith
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Date: 2/14/2009 2:36:00 PM
Wonderful Couplet Robin "I liked wine laced kisses. Happy Valentine's Day...Raul
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Date: 2/14/2009 12:53:00 PM
ahhh what would poetry be without some one writing poetry back. feeling the same feelings scratching each others back. a poetry warrior like you always on the attach. pierice heart with cupid arrow always from the back. john
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Date: 2/14/2009 12:22:00 PM
Dear Robin, such sweet images paint a beautiful poem! Great work! You are one of my favorites. Carolyn
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Date: 2/14/2009 11:38:00 AM
Beautiful, simply beautifully written words of love and on this Valentine weekend. Well done, Blessings, Ron
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Date: 2/14/2009 9:31:00 AM
....everything about "You," is like a gentle flowing river~and I can envision "You," sitting underneath a shade tree along its peaceful banks~looking into "Your Eyes, & Seeing The Truest Depths of Their Endless Beauties!!!"~And with that all said, "What A Beautiful Write!!!"~"My Love As Always To You & All Whom You Love, Forever, John!!!"~" Happy Valentines Day Beautiful Robin!!!":)
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Date: 2/14/2009 9:24:00 AM
....whomever is or is not, the object of Your affection within this "Wonderful Write of Yours!!?"~I would have to consider, one of "The Luckiest Men Alive!!!"~"You" surely are, one of the most "Passionate & Gifted Love Writers," that I have 'Ever' seen!!!....cont....
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Date: 2/14/2009 9:19:00 AM
Wow, wow, wow....Smile....what an amazing portrait of love that you painted here, "Beautiful Robin!!!"~Done within soo much class and taste, amid soo much tender-hearted passion!!!~Hmm, I say this in all admiration, innocency and respect~but what man, would never want this moment, to never end with "You!!!"....cont....
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Date: 2/14/2009 7:27:00 AM
Your not dreaming, we love you, he loves you, God loves you mostest! Light & Love debbie
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Date: 2/14/2009 7:02:00 AM
This one melted my Valentine Chocolates! ~ Carrie
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Date: 2/14/2009 6:40:00 AM
Beautiful poetry.You are a romantic poet Robin.Excellent.Rgds Brian
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Date: 2/14/2009 6:30:00 AM
This is so beautiful Robin..Love is flowing and you have dipped this write all in it.
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