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Dream of Dawn Constanza

I close my eyes to remind me, then time has no meaning at all whence overwhelmed in nature’s call. To sense again the wind so free, hear the groans of majestic bough gaze the fiery sun on the brow. Roam the track of ‘Wild flower lea’ Scale upon yon rocky fortress that towers in splendid sheerness. Spy wild Rose attuned to the Bee, in harmony assimilate in dewy shadows, oscillate. Gladly would I my youth to see, from here thousands of miles away relive my dream of dawn each day. I close my eyes to remind me to sense again the wind so free, roam the track of ‘Wild flower lea.’ Spy wild Rose attuned to the Bee gladly would I my youth to see! © Harry J Horsman 2012

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Date: 9/26/2012 5:46:00 AM
A belated congratulations on your super win in Andrea's "Can You Constanza" contest Harry. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/24/2012 9:59:00 AM
Good-morning Harry, :-). Congratulations with your awesome winning poem in Andrea's "Can you Constanza?" contest. Love it, always~ LUV*PD
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Date: 9/24/2012 2:01:00 AM
Belated Congratulations Harry loved this on first reading xx
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Date: 9/22/2012 9:26:00 PM
Lovely poem, congratulations on your win. Congratulations on your win. Lee
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Date: 9/22/2012 4:26:00 PM
A lovely dream Harry. Congrats on our win! One love. Joy Wells
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Date: 9/22/2012 4:17:00 PM
Congrats on your wonderful win, Harry! To sense again the wind so free...I love these beautiful lines! They truly capture the yearning for carefree days of youth...hugs, Rhonda
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Date: 9/22/2012 1:46:00 PM
Congradulations on your fine verse winning. Light & Love
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Date: 9/22/2012 5:12:00 AM
congrats on a great win Harry
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Date: 9/22/2012 12:47:00 AM
This is an excellent write! Congratulations on you win my friend! hugs:) Leonora
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Date: 9/21/2012 11:37:00 PM
Harry, Congratulations on your placement in Andrea’s “Can you Constanza? Contest.” There were so many really amazing entries we had a very difficult time deciding. We had to go by who followed the form best, and whose poem was most creative. I spent 4 and half hours going over the poems and Andrea, a lot longer. Thank you so much for your wonderful entry Mahalo, Connie
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Date: 9/21/2012 11:27:00 PM
Congratulations on your poem and win. Great fun. Love, Joyce
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Date: 9/21/2012 11:12:00 PM
MANY CONGRATS HARRY LUV ON A REMARKABLE WRITE AND DYNAMIC WIN FOR TTHIS AMAZING VIEW OF DAWN .. FANTASTIC IS YOUR GIFTED PEN ..
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Date: 9/21/2012 8:47:00 PM
Harry, how wonderful to finally see who wrote this one! It has a very "classic" feel to it and I imagined it to be written by someone influenced by the classic poets. So glad to see you on my list. Congrats for your win with this gem.
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Date: 8/30/2012 1:56:00 PM
beautiful write here, Harry
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Date: 8/30/2012 12:50:00 PM
Beautiful poem Harry, love elizabeth
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Date: 8/30/2012 10:23:00 AM
the images that spring to mind are something to be truly savoured like how you feel the word's wonder in a timeless way, harry.. my winning bet...just glorious!..:) huggs!
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Date: 8/30/2012 8:56:00 AM
"To sense again the wind so free." I actually love that particular line...it gravitates to me because sometimes I want to be free like the wind..This is an excellent poem written here from top to bottom..good luck in the contest..a sure winner!
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Date: 8/30/2012 6:19:00 AM
Thank you... Harry... that poem I wrote. ....when I found out...I had the sickness called writers block. ... I'm a terrible poet...whom can't find it no more... you are always so kind... I'll be back tonight...pd
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Date: 8/29/2012 5:27:00 PM
Harry, i love the second line,, time has no meaning at all... how true! how true! I can't explain the feeling of not knowing why time takes change instead of standing still... maybe that is why it is always standing behind us,,, waiting as our youth is stolen so secretly,,, i was 17 last time i checked,,, now, i'm 37,,, love your poem...xox~pd
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Date: 8/29/2012 3:26:00 PM
That's so cool man, i'm loving your words, what a poem. Read ;{>
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Date: 8/29/2012 10:57:00 AM
This is an incredibly amazing write Harry! I really enjoyed such an enlightening poem! You've done magnificently with this piece, Great Work!!
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Date: 8/29/2012 10:51:00 AM
It's good to dream a little back in time that was. It is the good memories we remember with joy. But we still have time to make new memories do not forget the "child" that we have in us - play a little - smell the flowers - discovering new things. Harry, a very intresant poem - like it a lot. Have a nice afternoon. oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 8/29/2012 10:32:00 AM
Enjoyed reading this one..That freedom of youth for us adults can only last for brief periods now..I enjoy those brief encounters with that freedom..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
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Date: 8/29/2012 10:35:00 AM
The fire ants were imported here from another country..My first encounter with them was about 48 years ago since then they have just multiplied..Some people are highly allergic to them..They will kill a new born animal that lays down close to a mound.The government sprayed but it never got rid of them...Sara
Date: 8/29/2012 8:27:00 AM
lovely harry ,I just re-read it with my eyes half closed and it really conjured up some lovely images xx
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