Dream Like State

In the morning I awake
      In the evening I vacate
           Vacate my body to a better place
                 Where my inhibitions hastily dissipate
Which allows my muse to embrace
      This holographic dream like state
            I stand in awe at the gate of my dreams
                  What lies beyond these gates is yet to be seen


Finished 2nd place 7/10/17
Contest Sponsor - Brian Strand.
Standard Contest no 40.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Roberts Avatar
October 9, 2017 at 6:39 AM
Congrats on your win :)
Hawkins Avatar
October 9, 2017 at 9:10 AM
thank you very much x
Barden Avatar
October 8, 2017 at 3:32 AM
Craig - sincere congratulations on your well-earned win, my friend, and blessings for more such recognition of your wonderful writing talents! Keep up the great work!
Hawkins Avatar
October 8, 2017 at 6:01 AM
Thank you for your lovely comments..
La France Avatar
October 7, 2017 at 5:09 PM
Craig, beautiful poem and congratulations on your win!
Hawkins Avatar
October 8, 2017 at 6:02 AM
Thank you
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