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Dream Keeper

The moon and stars, together scheme to trespass, searching through the air until they find my window sill - Caressing me with fragile streams their fingers, stroking, tussled hair as tender as a mother will As if to keep my dreams alive they keep a watch against the dawn and calm me in my restless sleep - I'll let the gentle night contrive a plan to help me sail upon a cloud, where dreams are mine to keep The moon and stars together scheme As if to keep my dreams alive ______________________________________________________________ Cornish Sonnet: 3/30/14

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 12/9/2014 6:22:00 AM
Congratulations over your winning hearts.Well done.Regards dear poet Richards. -Safa
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Date: 11/30/2014 12:22:00 PM
such a beautiful sonnet:-) many congrats Carrie:-)Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 11/30/2014 9:22:00 AM
Elegant and touching. Your dreams are well kept. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 11/30/2014 7:37:00 AM
Lovely sonnet Carrie! Magic of words n first place win! Big congrats!
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Date: 11/30/2014 1:31:00 AM
a nice win Carrie....SKAT
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Date: 4/16/2014 12:37:00 PM
This is a very nice poem :)
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Date: 4/12/2014 4:23:00 AM
Carrie a must read poem deserved win ! Congrats ! Always keep ur dreams alive ,, true !!
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Date: 4/11/2014 7:22:00 PM
Just saw you at the blog. I can't recall all the rules to know what you did wrong. But anyway, this is sure a beauty. Congrats, CArrie.
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Date: 4/11/2014 6:37:00 PM
Beautiful Carrie. Love, Joyce
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Date: 4/11/2014 5:25:00 PM
Congrats on your winning work..Way to go..Sara
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Date: 4/11/2014 1:33:00 PM
Love the serenity this poem MAKES you feel, nice piece and congrats.
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Date: 3/30/2014 4:53:00 PM
This Is Very Lovely As Poetic...Dreams Apart From A Heart's Deepest Wish Be That Of Love, Portray Your Words Unto Her Depthful Light: Bravo....Yours Truly, Jeremy
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