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Dream Island

~Fragrance of clear mist swathes the bouncing air,
Dizzy where jasmines and blossoms unfurl
That serenity ripples everywhere,
And gulls hover above a wavelet's curl:

Through morning sail into pastoral bliss
Orchards flaunt their Riviera  attire, 
While an islet lies warm as sunset's kiss
Till birdsong drools in rhythm of a choir.

Glow of evening sparks its luminous eyes--
When bathing of pasture ends, to rest 
Afloat my  dream island   how this breath sighs
For her verdant  trees, her water dance fest.

Lovely isle  beneath a tropical moon
Enticing my roam   like a ballad’s tune ~



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3/14/2017 Where I Want To Go 
Contest of Nicola Byrne
Rhymes checked at ryhmezone.com
Syllables verified at howmanysyllables.com

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 4/11/2017 7:24:00 AM
Paradise in a poem, nette, this is so lovely you make me wish for salty breezes and a warm hug. Congrats.
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Date: 3/22/2017 10:19:00 AM
Nice Composition. Congrats Nette to win top. love
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Date: 3/15/2017 10:02:00 AM
Beautiful sonnet Nette, a joy to read, good luck in contest, Roy. :)
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Date: 3/14/2017 3:09:00 PM
Sweet words here! Sounds like a place i would love to go to! Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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Date: 3/14/2017 12:20:00 AM
Well done dear poet ! Bananas mangos pineapples and sunny 80 degrees every day is my ideal island Nette...*winks...much love,james
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Date: 3/13/2017 7:10:00 PM
Dreaming injects colour and vitality into life and your sonnet is a gorgeous snapshot of all that is possible... when one chooses to dream. So beautiful nette :-) a fave, 7+ blessings, lynn
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Date: 3/13/2017 4:51:00 PM
One of your poetic gifts is to enchant subtly with images marked by distinct wordplay. Postcard pretty rated 7!
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Date: 3/13/2017 3:51:00 PM
- Sounds like a pardise, Nette :) - Beautiful - Good luck in the contest - Happy hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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