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Dream In Dream Out (Inception)

Dream within a dream; don't stay long Real life slows, but mind keeps aging The feel of falling, wakes you strong Dream within a dream, don't stay long Consciousness knows, there's something wrong Memories break...song is staging Dream within a dream; don't stay long! Real life slows...but mind keeps aging...

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/6/2010 11:50:00 AM

Congratulations Jessica on your win in Andrea Dietrich's contest "Movie Scene Triolet". Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/5/2010 3:28:00 PM

Jessica. I love how you did your triolet. On the other hand, I was not so happy about the movie. haha. I think most america loves it, but not me. Anyway. a big congratulations to you. LUv, Andrea

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 8/5/2010 8:12:00 AM

Congrats Jessica on your wonderful win in Andrea's contest with this great piece.. enjoy another victory dance my friend..meet u at winners circle ..terrific..with luv..

Shirley Bracken

Date: 7/29/2010 3:51:00 PM

Great job, Jessica. I can understand, especially 'real life slows...but mind keeps aging.' Great imagery, Shirley

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/29/2010 2:51:00 PM

That is me Jessica,, dream in dram out,, cool poem. My dreams seem to change a lot,, Have a good one,..p.d.

John Loving Iii

Date: 7/29/2010 2:36:00 PM

great movie. your right dream with in a dream dont stay long. john