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Dream Feathers

Missing you, my love, Feathers from our pillow fight fill my dreams tonight. _________________________ For contest by SKAT A Feathers the Haiku

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 7/16/2015 6:14:00 PM
The imagery is incredible a 7 and congratulations on your wonderful win. Hugs Eve
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Darlene Gifford
Date: 7/16/2015 10:26:00 PM
Thank you, Eve, and to yourself as well with your top win. Blessings, and thank you for the 7. much appreciated. Darlene
Date: 7/16/2015 11:32:00 AM
Beautiful poem, brought a tear to my eye-doesn't happen often. The epitome of the power of simplicity. Really, really loved it.
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Darlene Gifford
Date: 7/16/2015 11:48:00 AM
Hi, JAMES, your comments make my day, and are so much appreciated. Especially since I was feeling pretty discouraged over the contest results that came in today. This poem only got an honorable mention, despite all the great comments I was receiving. Go figure! ~~Darlene
Date: 7/16/2015 11:00:00 AM
Dropping back with my congrats Darlene - one of my personal faves too:-) hugs Jan xx
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Darlene Gifford
Date: 7/16/2015 11:11:00 AM
Thank you, Jan, and congrats to you as well on your win. Blessings and my best to you always, ~~Darlene
Date: 7/16/2015 12:11:00 AM
this is really really nice, Darlene. Gosh, one of my favorites!!
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Darlene Gifford
Date: 7/16/2015 10:42:00 AM
Thanks, Andrea, but it only got an honorable mention in SKAT's contest.
Date: 7/15/2015 11:22:00 PM
Lovely, fluffy, wistful Haiku, Darlene, Well done. Viv x
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Darlene Gifford
Date: 7/16/2015 10:44:00 AM
Thank you , Viv, I'm happy you enjoyed it. Be Blessed, Darlene
Date: 7/15/2015 11:14:00 PM
Darlene, Congratulations on your wonderful win. Always ~LINDA~
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Darlene Gifford
Date: 7/16/2015 10:56:00 AM
Thanks, Linda, if Honorable mention is consider a wonderful win, then I'll accept it. Some day I'll do better. Thanks for your comments. ~~Darlene
Date: 7/15/2015 10:54:00 PM
Darlene:) Congratulations on your awesome feather win. **SKAT**
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Darlene Gifford
Date: 7/16/2015 10:52:00 AM
Thanks for the honorable mention. But I don't think that qualifies as an awesome win. But thank you anyway for considering me.
Date: 7/14/2015 7:39:00 AM
Sweet and romantic.
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Darlene Gifford
Date: 7/14/2015 5:28:00 PM
Thank you for reading my poems, Richard. It is much appreciated.
Date: 7/13/2015 7:16:00 PM
I enjoyed this, Darlene! Very piognant, and good luck in the contest :)
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Darlene Gifford
Date: 7/13/2015 7:18:00 PM
Thanks, Laura, and the same to you.
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Darlene Gifford
Date: 7/13/2015 7:16:00 PM
Thanks, Janece, Haiku's force us to use our imagination and fill in the blanks.
Date: 7/13/2015 6:30:00 PM
Very sweet. Makes me wonder why these lovers are apart. Something to think about. Good luck in the contest.
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Darlene Gifford
Date: 7/13/2015 7:20:00 PM
read my comment above, Janece. Guess I commented in the wrong space.
Date: 7/13/2015 3:08:00 AM
oh how cute - good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx
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Darlene Gifford
Date: 7/13/2015 9:01:00 AM
Thanks, Jan, I hope you enter, too!

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