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Darlene Gifford

Dream Feathers

Missing you, my love,

Feathers from our pillow fight

fill my dreams tonight.
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For contest by SKAT A
Feathers the Haiku

Copyright © Darlene Gifford | Year Posted 2015

cute lovedreammiss youhaiku

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July 16, 2015 at 6:14 PM

The imagery is incredible a 7 and congratulations on your wonderful win. Hugs Eve

Darlene Gifford

July 16, 2015 at 10:26 PM

Thank you, Eve, and to yourself as well with your top win. Blessings, and thank you for the 7. much appreciated. Darlene

July 16, 2015 at 11:32 AM

Beautiful poem, brought a tear to my eye-doesn't happen often. The epitome of the power of simplicity. Really, really loved it.

Darlene Gifford

July 16, 2015 at 11:48 AM

Hi, JAMES, your comments make my day, and are so much appreciated. Especially since I was feeling pretty discouraged over the contest results that came in today. This poem only got an honorable mention, despite all the great comments I was receiving. Go figure! ~~Darlene

July 16, 2015 at 11:00 AM

Dropping back with my congrats Darlene - one of my personal faves too:-) hugs Jan xx

Darlene Gifford

July 16, 2015 at 11:11 AM

Thank you, Jan, and congrats to you as well on your win. Blessings and my best to you always, ~~Darlene

Andrea Dietrich

July 16, 2015 at 12:11 AM

this is really really nice, Darlene. Gosh, one of my favorites!!

Darlene Gifford

July 16, 2015 at 10:42 AM

Thanks, Andrea, but it only got an honorable mention in SKAT's contest.

July 15, 2015 at 11:22 PM

Lovely, fluffy, wistful Haiku, Darlene, Well done. Viv x

Darlene Gifford

July 16, 2015 at 10:44 AM

Thank you , Viv, I'm happy you enjoyed it. Be Blessed, Darlene

Poet Destroyer A

July 15, 2015 at 11:14 PM

Darlene, Congratulations on your wonderful win. Always ~LINDA~

Darlene Gifford

July 16, 2015 at 10:56 AM

Thanks, Linda, if Honorable mention is consider a wonderful win, then I'll accept it. Some day I'll do better. Thanks for your comments. ~~Darlene

July 15, 2015 at 10:54 PM

Darlene:) Congratulations on your awesome feather win. **SKAT**

Darlene Gifford

July 16, 2015 at 10:52 AM

Thanks for the honorable mention. But I don't think that qualifies as an awesome win. But thank you anyway for considering me.

Richard Lamoureux

July 14, 2015 at 7:39 AM

Sweet and romantic.

Darlene Gifford

July 14, 2015 at 5:28 PM

Thank you for reading my poems, Richard. It is much appreciated.

July 13, 2015 at 7:16 PM

I enjoyed this, Darlene! Very piognant, and good luck in the contest :)

Darlene Gifford

July 13, 2015 at 7:18 PM

Thanks, Laura, and the same to you.

Darlene Gifford

July 13, 2015 at 7:16 PM

Thanks, Janece, Haiku's force us to use our imagination and fill in the blanks.

July 13, 2015 at 6:30 PM

Very sweet. Makes me wonder why these lovers are apart. Something to think about. Good luck in the contest.

Darlene Gifford

July 13, 2015 at 7:20 PM

read my comment above, Janece. Guess I commented in the wrong space.

July 13, 2015 at 3:08 AM

oh how cute - good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx

Darlene Gifford

July 13, 2015 at 9:01 AM

Thanks, Jan, I hope you enter, too!

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