Dream Feast

Night has come
my dreams are calling
and I am falling
sleeping
again, I'm dreaming....

Through the day 
he haunts me
but at night....he hunts me.
I am his prey
his loving feast
my tender beast
I'll wrap you in my silken heat
in molten streams
and passions screams.
Dream lover I am yours.
Take me, take me
try to break me
rock me, roll me
but don't control me
let me fly, soaring high
higher
higher....
entangled in your raging fire
fill me with your sweet desire.
Hold me, catch me
I am falling....
baby please
please
don't stop taking
until the days first rays are breaking
before the agony
of waking....




Inspired by Tracy Deckers RSVPoetry contesy
Inspired by Christopher Higgins "The Hunger of the Night"

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008



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Date: 12/30/2008 7:40:00 PM
Excellent rsvp to Christopher who I just admire - Steamy stuff - God Bless, MJ
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Date: 12/30/2008 4:58:00 PM
Wow! Awesome and steamy rsvp to one of our favorite poets here! Super excellent dreaming (and writing) here! Loved it! Good luck Robin! Love, Shar
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Date: 12/30/2008 10:59:00 AM
Smile~What a very passionate write here dear lady! I can only imagine how extremely fortunate this person would be, whom should fill Your beautiful dreams!!? May You never awaken from these wonders dear!! And, "Have A Beautiful Day Beautiful Robin!"~"Love Always Unto You & Yours, John!"~"Happy New Year Dear!":)
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Date: 12/30/2008 10:12:00 AM
'...the agony of waking,' ...super concluding line! Tastefully passionate, with marvelous imagery and language... Love, Keith
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Date: 12/30/2008 10:04:00 AM
The power of dreams...sometimes we want to wake....some we want to keep sleeping, dreaming on! Wonderful writing here, Robin! ~ Love, Carrie
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Date: 12/30/2008 9:12:00 AM
sweet sweet dreams. good work jhl
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Date: 12/30/2008 8:44:00 AM
Okay, so I am going say it again...you are amazing. I just love the simple way that your poems overpower my senses..I love the smoothness of how you tell a story and how your poems flow...this piece is filled with numerous colorful language. Well done Robin..your fan, Chris.
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