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Dream Dance

maiden in the air frills of pink and satin fly raindrops swirl from moody clouds she is barely there dancing fairy sways with breeze above enchanted river. Written on 7/7/2019

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James Inman

Date: 7/28/2019 3:26:00 PM

A delightful dream Laura with beautiful imagery.

Laura Leiser
Date: 7/28/2019 10:16:00 PM

Thank you! :)

Jeanne Mcgee

Date: 7/22/2019 8:58:00 AM

It's enchanting. Congrats on your win.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 7/22/2019 5:26:00 AM

- A beautiful dream dance, Laura :) - Congratulations on your great first place in the contest: :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 7/21/2019 9:13:00 PM

Such lovely lines.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 7/21/2019 3:03:00 PM

Wow Laura, this enchanting piece deserves your first placement! Congratulations on your wonderful win. xxoo

Laura Leiser
Date: 7/21/2019 10:46:00 PM

Thank you so much, Connie! :)

Joseph May

Date: 7/21/2019 2:27:00 PM

An enchanting write Laura..Congrats on your win..

Laura Leiser
Date: 7/21/2019 10:45:00 PM

Thank you very much for my placement in your contest, Joseph! I’m thrilled! :)

Silent One

Date: 7/14/2019 10:34:00 AM

Now this is a gReat choka.. great use of words .

Laura Leiser
Date: 7/14/2019 7:33:00 PM

Happy you liked this, Silent! So good to hear from you! I haven’t been writing much lately..Will check out your latest work...it’s always amazing! :)

Gershon Wolf

Date: 7/10/2019 8:12:00 PM

As light as air, and as lovely too. G.L. in the contest, Laura. :) gw

Gershon Wolf
Date: 7/21/2019 2:36:00 PM

Back with congrats on your top-flight finish in the contest, Laura. Richly deserved. Best wishes, Gershon

Laura Leiser
Date: 7/11/2019 9:37:00 AM

Thank you, Gershon! Happy you liked this one! :)

Sunlite Wanter

Date: 7/7/2019 6:21:00 PM

Beautiful image!

Laura Leiser
Date: 7/7/2019 8:22:00 PM

Thanks so much, Sunlite! :)