Laura Leiser Poet Choka

Dream Dance

maiden in the air
        frills of pink and satin fly
             raindrops swirl from moody clouds
                    she is barely there
             dancing fairy sways with breeze
                        above enchanted river. 




Written on 7/7/2019

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James Inman July 28, 2019 at 3:26 PM A delightful dream Laura with beautiful imagery. Laura Leiser July 28, 2019 at 10:16 PM Thank you! :)

Jeanne Mcgee July 22, 2019 at 8:58 AM It's enchanting. Congrats on your win.

Anne-Lise Andresen July 22, 2019 at 5:26 AM - A beautiful dream dance, Laura :) - Congratulations on your great first place in the contest: :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Richard Lamoureux July 21, 2019 at 9:13 PM Such lovely lines.

Connie Marcum Wong July 21, 2019 at 3:03 PM Wow Laura, this enchanting piece deserves your first placement! Congratulations on your wonderful win. xxoo Laura Leiser July 21, 2019 at 10:46 PM Thank you so much, Connie! :)

Joseph May July 21, 2019 at 2:27 PM An enchanting write Laura..Congrats on your win.. Laura Leiser July 21, 2019 at 10:45 PM Thank you very much for my placement in your contest, Joseph! I’m thrilled! :)

Silent One July 14, 2019 at 10:34 AM Now this is a gReat choka.. great use of words . Laura Leiser July 14, 2019 at 7:33 PM Happy you liked this, Silent! So good to hear from you! I haven’t been writing much lately..Will check out your latest work...it’s always amazing! :)

Gershon Wolf July 10, 2019 at 8:12 PM As light as air, and as lovely too. G.L. in the contest, Laura. :) gw Gershon Wolf July 21, 2019 at 2:36 PM Back with congrats on your top-flight finish in the contest, Laura. Richly deserved. Best wishes, Gershon Laura Leiser July 11, 2019 at 9:37 AM Thank you, Gershon! Happy you liked this one! :)

Sunlite Wanter July 7, 2019 at 6:21 PM Beautiful image! Laura Leiser July 7, 2019 at 8:22 PM Thanks so much, Sunlite! :)