Leon Enriquez Poet Sonnet

Dream Come True

Ask and wish bold, ask for clear sight;
Dare to seek out, dare to be brave;
Reach and unfold, reach your true light;
Explore grand bout, explore your crave;
Allow your heart, allow your soul;
Mind that fond dream, mind knows the way.
Choice helps you start, choice makes you whole;
Opt for fine theme, opt not to stray.
Move your world now, move your thoughts forth;
Embrace your dream, embrace your play.
Touch and endow, touch and go north;
Reap your grand scheme, reap your sure day.
Use your time here, use your days well;
Explore rich space, explore and tell.




Leon Enriquez
08 November 2014
Singapore

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Jasen Ridley September 20, 2023 at 8:12 AM Another great one!! Very well written Leon Enriquez September 21, 2023 at 7:33 AM Dear Jason: Thank you. Leon

Adeyemi Joshua August 13, 2017 at 4:46 PM Stylishly structured!..... Leon Enriquez August 13, 2017 at 10:06 PM Dear Adeyemi: Thank you. Leon

Paul Schneiter May 13, 2016 at 10:54 PM I like the positive, affirmative tone of this poem. I also like the soundness of the advice that it gives. I think it's a fine effort, and I commend you for sharing it. Leon Enriquez May 14, 2016 at 3:49 AM Dear Paul: Thank you for your kind words. Leon

Parker Spady March 25, 2015 at 1:05 PM very good write keep it up loved reading this Leon Enriquez March 25, 2015 at 8:27 PM Dear Parker: Glad this poem delighted you. Thank you. Leon

Jasper Matthews March 23, 2015 at 11:19 AM wow, I wish I came up with such great lines, rhyme and words that was amazing give me more Leon Enriquez March 23, 2015 at 8:46 PM Dear Jasper: Thank you for your kind comments. All the best then, Leon.

Beryl A. Ouma March 23, 2015 at 4:09 AM This is a good poem Leon Leon Enriquez March 23, 2015 at 6:39 AM Dear Beryl: Thank you for your kind words. All the best then, Leon.

Xaysouvanh Phengphong March 21, 2015 at 11:53 AM Hi Leon, This sonnet is great! I used it to explain to my fellow Poets in Laos who barely started their ESL in poetry! Kob Jai Thanks Leon Enriquez March 21, 2015 at 1:14 PM Dear Xaysouvanh: Thank you. Glad this poem is useful to you in your efforts and ESL journey for your fellow poets in Laos. All the best then, Leon.

Graphite Drug March 20, 2015 at 1:19 PM A sonnet form with 8 syllable lines. Well done. It reads like positive philosophy, "live long and prosper." The structure is beautiful and you have an excellent grasp of English. Glad you posted here. Leon Enriquez March 21, 2015 at 12:49 AM Dear Graphite Drug: Glad this poem delighted you. Thank you for your kind words. Leon

Ralph Sergi March 20, 2015 at 8:21 AM Hi Leon: Thanks for sharing a dream lifting poem! Leon Enriquez March 21, 2015 at 12:50 AM Dear Ralph: Thank you for your kind words. All the best then, Leon.

Charles Bernabi March 20, 2015 at 7:03 AM To dream small is to deny oneself the glory that could be, therefore one needs to dream big to reach for the stars. And your wonderful poem above is so full of rich wisdom and leaves an uplifting mark upon ones heart. Thanks for sharing. Leon Enriquez March 21, 2015 at 12:52 AM Dear Charles: Glad this poem delighted you. Thank you. Leon

Vasudevan Desikachari March 20, 2015 at 5:22 AM Dreams indeed remain mysterious and therefore a realm to be explored in practical and para-psychology.Some dreams even take one to his previous birth indicating one's place of birth, parents etc.,and just how a dream picturize these remain absolutely strange.Leon,i agree there is space here for knowing more-"Explore rich space,explore and tell"- indeed is an expressive line and writing this you deserve a full 7.My good wishes to you. Leon Enriquez March 21, 2015 at 12:52 AM Dear Vasudevan: Thank you. Leon

Vasudevan Desikachari March 20, 2015 at 5:09 AM Dreams indeed remain realm unexplored even today and there indeed exists space a here for experimental and para-Cpsychologists.It is indeed weird that some dreams foretell what's going to happen and these happen.So the poet rightly says,"explore rich space,and tell" On the whole a good piece of writing indeed and a good poem. Leon Enriquez March 21, 2015 at 12:55 AM Dear Vasudevan: Thank you. Leon

Jeffrey Dela Cruz March 20, 2015 at 3:15 AM The poem is full of optimistic, which makes my works the opposite of your life bringing poem. Nice work you have there, sir. Leon Enriquez March 21, 2015 at 12:48 AM Dear Jeffrey: Thank you. Leon

Viv Wigley March 19, 2015 at 8:40 PM Life affriming, motivational write. Carpe diem! Congrats on poem of the day. Regards, Viv Leon Enriquez March 20, 2015 at 2:02 AM Dear Viv: Thank you for the kind words. Leon

Jack Ellison March 19, 2015 at 4:13 PM An excellent upbeat positive write! Everyone should have this great outlook! I try! Cheers, my friend! Leon Enriquez March 20, 2015 at 2:00 AM Dear Jack: Glad this poem delighted you. Thank you. Leon

Derek Riemer March 19, 2015 at 3:53 PM Nice! I like how each line has a repeting element. Leon Enriquez March 20, 2015 at 1:59 AM Dear Derek: Thank you. Leon

Tim Smith November 10, 2014 at 4:26 PM Congrats on the feature my friend...use your day wise...cheers Leon Enriquez November 11, 2014 at 1:36 AM Dear Tim: Thank you my friend. Leon

Maurice Yvonne November 10, 2014 at 1:44 PM Congratulations on your write being chosen poem of the day. Leon Enriquez November 11, 2014 at 1:37 AM Dear Maurice: Thank you. Leon

David Meade November 10, 2014 at 12:11 PM Your poem is a road map for chasing your dreams . . . so many times we let our dreams fade and die . . . your poem breaths life into this important aspect of life! Nicely done. Leon Enriquez November 11, 2014 at 1:38 AM Dear David: Thank you. Leon

Verlena S. Walker November 10, 2014 at 10:05 AM Wonderfully written Leon... Congratulations on being feature as poem of the day... Verlena Leon Enriquez November 11, 2014 at 1:38 AM Dear Verlena: Thank you. Leon

Beryl A. Ouma November 10, 2014 at 7:21 AM I love it, thanks Leon Enriquez November 11, 2014 at 1:39 AM Dear Beryl: Thank you. Leon

James Horn November 10, 2014 at 5:30 AM I would have given it a ten but they didn't have one. At one time or another we all have been abused by people, the system and various things. Mine was a Boy Scout Life Saving Merit Badge Counselor who tried to reach into my swimming suit when I was 13. Because of him I dropped out of Boy Scouts. That was the last merit badge I needed for Eagle Scout. Will never forget it. Also, Leon was a small town in Kansas near a old Titan II missile site. Jim Horn Leon Enriquez November 11, 2014 at 1:41 AM Dear James: Thank you. Yes, we need to keep our dreams alive. Leon

Anne-Lise Andresen November 10, 2014 at 2:48 AM - Congrats with today's poem, Leon !! - oxox // Anne-Lise :) Leon Enriquez November 11, 2014 at 1:41 AM Deat Anne Lise: Thank you. Leon

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders November 10, 2014 at 1:09 AM Wise words penned, Leon! Congrats to you on having the poem of the day!! Leon Enriquez November 11, 2014 at 1:35 AM Dear Rhonda: Thank you. Leon

Eve Roper November 8, 2014 at 9:55 AM Leon, I have placed this on my favorite folder a "7" form me :) hugs eve Leon Enriquez November 9, 2014 at 3:00 AM Dear Eve: Thank you for the kind words. This poem was not easy to write but the process enjoyable. Leon