Malabika Ray Choudhury Poet Free verse

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Dream Catchers

life goes on...even though our hopes are crushed, 
          even though a few flowers, which could have fully bloomed
                      and enchanted the world... fall and perish.
                  they leave their dreams to the dream catchers





                                   October 31, 2021
Taken from original poem "Life's Crushed Roses" - for contest "Mix It Up" sponsored by Constance La France
  
                       For "Liberum Divisa 8” Poetry Contest
                        Sponsor: Gregory Richard Barden
                      
                     For "Bite Size Poem - 32" Poetry Contest      
                                   Sponsor: Line Gauthier
                                       FIRST PLACE

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Line Gauthier November 12, 2022 at 1:10 PM Beautiful ~ Malabika Ray Choudhury November 12, 2022 at 1:14 PM Thanks, Line. I feel honoured.

Andrea Dietrich January 21, 2022 at 11:26 AM AWESOME first place win. Congrats to you! Malabika Ray Choudhury January 21, 2022 at 11:43 AM Thank you, Andrea. Yes, it is an honour indeed.

Kim Merryman January 21, 2022 at 9:37 AM I really like this, Mala! Congrats on your 1st place win in Line's contest! Blessings, Kim M

Valsa George January 21, 2022 at 2:21 AM Back to you with Congratulations Mala on your great win ! Love the line... 'they leave their dreams to the dream catchers'...! Malabika Ray Choudhury January 21, 2022 at 11:42 AM Thanks, Valsa. That is my favourite line too.

Connie Marcum Wong January 21, 2022 at 12:07 AM Congratulations on your Trophy. A worthy winner my friend. I have a dream catcher on the wall above my bed. I love the native custom. Blessings xxoo Malabika Ray Choudhury January 21, 2022 at 11:41 AM Thanks, Connie. I love that custom too.

Christuraj Alex January 20, 2022 at 10:58 PM Great philosophy revealed. Congratulations! Malabika Ray Choudhury January 21, 2022 at 11:40 AM Thanks, Christuraj. Really appreciate.

Krish Radhakrishna January 20, 2022 at 11:58 AM Superb six lines! Congrats on a well deserved top win! I love the picture that goes with it! Very good! Malabika Ray Choudhury January 20, 2022 at 4:33 PM Thank you, Krish. Really appreciate your inspiring comments. Pictures add some charm.

Paula Goldsmith January 20, 2022 at 8:38 AM Back with congratulations on this win. This is a lovely write. Have a blessed day.................. Malabika Ray Choudhury January 20, 2022 at 4:30 PM Thank you, Paula. Really appreciate your kind comments.

Valsa George November 9, 2021 at 10:33 PM Short and sweet is your poem ! The dream catchers pick up shards of broken dreams and remake wholesome ones and live upto their dreams. Malabika Ray Choudhury January 20, 2022 at 4:30 PM Thank you, Valsa. Appreciate your thoughtful comment.

Paula Goldsmith November 5, 2021 at 12:05 PM Your "Dream Catchers" is a lovely story/write. Have a blessed/fun day writing away..................

Unseeking Seeker October 31, 2021 at 8:26 PM Beautiful! Malabika Ray Choudhury November 1, 2021 at 5:40 AM Thank you for visiting my page.