Dream Catchers

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life goes on...even though our hopes are crushed, even though a few flowers, which could have fully bloomed and enchanted the world... fall and perish. they leave their dreams to the dream catchers October 31, 2021 Taken from original poem "Life's Crushed Roses" - for contest "Mix It Up" sponsored by Constance La France For "Liberum Divisa 8” Poetry Contest Sponsor: Gregory Richard Barden For "Bite Size Poem - 32" Poetry Contest Sponsor: Line Gauthier FIRST PLACE

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Line Gauthier

Date: 11/12/2022 1:10:00 PM

Beautiful ~

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 11/12/2022 1:14:00 PM

Thanks, Line. I feel honoured.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/21/2022 11:26:00 AM

AWESOME first place win. Congrats to you!

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 1/21/2022 11:43:00 AM

Thank you, Andrea. Yes, it is an honour indeed.

Kim Merryman

Date: 1/21/2022 9:37:00 AM

I really like this, Mala! Congrats on your 1st place win in Line's contest! Blessings, Kim M

Valsa George

Date: 1/21/2022 2:21:00 AM

Back to you with Congratulations Mala on your great win ! Love the line... 'they leave their dreams to the dream catchers'...!

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 1/21/2022 11:42:00 AM

Thanks, Valsa. That is my favourite line too.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 1/21/2022 12:07:00 AM

Congratulations on your Trophy. A worthy winner my friend. I have a dream catcher on the wall above my bed. I love the native custom. Blessings xxoo

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 1/21/2022 11:41:00 AM

Thanks, Connie. I love that custom too.