Dream Angel Cries

Awake 
             
                                            Angel Heart 
           
                                        Shoot Godly Arrow
                                                   ^
                                                Jesus
              
                                            Loves Poets
        
                                    Birds adore shiny Apple 
                                                   ^
                                       Peace heals World 
                                                   ^
                                               Happy
             
                                            Child Smile 
                                                   ^
                                                Alive
            
                                            Blood Flows 
                                                   ^
                                        Lover touch Aglow
                                                   ^
                                               Shine 
 
                                           Sunny Skies
                                                   ^
                                       Dream Angel Cries





Contest: Fem Bogstaver (Danish)
Sponsor: Rhoda Tripp
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Gauthier Avatar
May 5, 2018 at 8:44 PM
Belated congrats, Arturo. You sure picked a difficult contest for your first... and you did great! Bravo.
Michael Avatar
May 5, 2018 at 9:27 PM
I remember this...it had me thinking...Thanks for passing by...All the best Line...
Acrich Avatar
February 15, 2018 at 10:30 AM
(: I don't want to BS you so I will just leave a mark so you can see I read it, Marc
Michael Avatar
February 15, 2018 at 12:54 PM
That's nice of you...It's the least of things I need...Thanks Marc
DiMino Avatar
February 12, 2018 at 12:46 AM
Perfect! Congratulations. This is not an easy accomplishment, using fewer words and yet writing such a full poem, lavish with beauty.
Barden Avatar
January 20, 2018 at 3:18 AM
Congratulations on your win, Arturo - this was a very tough exercise, and I am honored to be on a list with such wonderful writers! Blessings, Friend! :-)
Michael Avatar
January 20, 2018 at 6:32 AM
Good morning Gregory...I see you have your girl close to you, I sleep with my own next to the bed... Thank you, my friend... I believe as writers we must inject light into our words...for we are the poems
Biever Avatar
January 15, 2018 at 6:16 PM
Beautiful !
Moorman Avatar
January 14, 2018 at 10:57 PM
Congratulations, Arturo. I missed the cut.
Michael Avatar
January 15, 2018 at 7:17 AM
Thank you, Curtis...I feel truly blessed for there were many poems just as good or even better than my own...Have a nice day
Roper Avatar
January 14, 2018 at 6:43 PM
Congratulations on your win,Arturo ! Hugs Eve ~`*
Michael Avatar
January 15, 2018 at 7:15 AM
Thank you, Eve... I am a grateful winner anyway, ...because I believed there were many good poems in that contest... All the best to you
Robinson Jr. Avatar
January 4, 2018 at 1:53 PM
Very creatively well-done poem, Arturo! You brought your 'A' game to this challenging contest. Love and joy always.
Michael Avatar
January 4, 2018 at 3:17 PM
Thank you, Freddie... Happy New Year to you and yours
Goudreau Avatar
January 1, 2018 at 4:58 PM
Its like a dream
Michael Avatar
January 2, 2018 at 2:47 AM
Got it...As you awake, try to piece together your dreams...it's not easy sometimes, imagine doing it with 5 letter words... Thanks for passing by...All blessing to you
Goudreau Avatar
January 1, 2018 at 4:57 PM
Beautiful descripyions Arturo
Duggan Avatar
December 30, 2017 at 6:42 PM
Beautiful Arturo, lovely choice of words, life in a nutshell, thank you so much for sharing and take care.....Vera
Michael Avatar
December 30, 2017 at 6:49 PM
Thank you, Vera. Lovely name...All the best to you for 2018
Godwin Avatar
December 30, 2017 at 7:55 AM
An absolute delight! I have no idea how she can judge so many great entries, and this is one of them. I think everyone who accomplished the 5 word challenge is already a winner. Poetry hugs ... CayCay (don't shy from contests, they aren't really judges, just other people with the individual perspectives - go for it)
Godwin Avatar
December 30, 2017 at 9:20 AM
I, too, only compete with myself, just to climb the list gives my muse motivation. Again, it is best to compete just to compete because winners are totally up to the sponsors perspective. No judge is (that I know of) judging with benefit of a poetry degree. Remember that so nothing bothers you, and even then it will at times.
Michael Avatar
December 30, 2017 at 8:19 AM
Hi CayCay...I realize it opens up another area of poetry writing, and I learn... but my nature is not to compete...and when I do it's against myself... Anyway my feets in the water, I may soon jump in...Thanks for the support...I appreciate it a lot...All the best to you and yours for 2018
Kendrick Avatar
December 27, 2017 at 7:08 AM
Looks like you did well..Thanks for dropping by..Sara
Michael Avatar
December 27, 2017 at 7:15 AM
I thank God for all mercies...Hope you are well...All the best to you and yours, Sara...
Flaherty Avatar
December 26, 2017 at 6:52 PM
Birds adore shinny apple Natural dead pan Its like an umbrella in the rain 7
Michael Avatar
December 26, 2017 at 7:18 PM
So true...even with a flat view...Will see what I can do
Horsman Avatar
December 26, 2017 at 5:27 PM
Wonderful poetry,,a joy to read.
Michael Avatar
December 26, 2017 at 5:59 PM
Thank you, Harry...All the best to you and yours
Lovejoy-Burton Avatar
December 26, 2017 at 4:44 AM
Luminous. I love this one. Congrats on POTD. LLB
Michael Avatar
December 26, 2017 at 5:58 PM
Thank you Leanne...
Choudhary Avatar
December 25, 2017 at 12:09 PM
Very beautiful and very nice... it's an wonderful poem
Michael Avatar
December 25, 2017 at 12:34 PM
Thank you, Reena... God bless you and yours
Daniel Avatar
December 24, 2017 at 9:26 AM
Very lovely, congratulations on POTD, Arturo:) thank you very much for your wishes:) my season's greetings to you and your family, have a blessed New Year 2018:)
Michael Avatar
December 25, 2017 at 12:34 PM
God bless you and yours Jo....
Smith Avatar
December 22, 2017 at 7:05 PM
Very beautiful Arturo
Michael Avatar
December 22, 2017 at 7:27 PM
How are you Tim?...I'm always happy to hear from you... Thank you...All the best for the Christmas
Wayman Avatar
December 22, 2017 at 4:21 PM
You continue to put your best foot forward, Arturo. Well Done!
Michael Avatar
December 22, 2017 at 5:31 PM
I finally realized that every day counts...Nothing less than my best...I can't say how long I will be living for...All the best to you and yours Danielle
May Avatar
December 22, 2017 at 11:02 AM
You met the challenge well Arturo.. Have a Merry Christmas
Michael Avatar
December 22, 2017 at 11:39 AM
Yes, thank you very much, Joseph...All the best
Vaso Avatar
December 22, 2017 at 1:23 AM
Very well done! Bright candle, bright poem!!
Michael Avatar
December 22, 2017 at 11:39 AM
Thank you, Arthur... Have a bright one too
Kannan Avatar
December 22, 2017 at 1:11 AM
Such a wonderful write.... Congratulations on your well deserved POTD... Thanks for sharing this uplifting poetry...
Michael Avatar
December 22, 2017 at 11:37 AM
Thank you Supraja, All the best for this season and the coming New Year
Shaw Avatar
December 20, 2017 at 8:19 PM
Arturo what can I say - Such beauty of the mind all conveyed within the lines - Blessed are we that you share the beauty you see - A very deserved POTD for a well deserving guy - God bless you . . .
Michael Avatar
December 20, 2017 at 8:27 PM
You're very kind Indiana... Loved your comment... Thank you - Thank God
Ashley Avatar
December 20, 2017 at 7:14 PM
My dear friend Arturo, returning with congratulations on POTD honors on your lovely and uplifting write. I hope you're enjoying a wonderful evening mon ami. Warmest wishes and hugs..
Michael Avatar
December 20, 2017 at 8:11 PM
Thank you, my friend. I hope all is well with you. Can't wait till you are back writing again, but soon this hectic, but spiritually important season will be over All the best to you Susan...A big hug as always
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