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Smile at an isle Alone with a whale Oh the world Is not as bold Snow and cold Turn me into old But thoughts of love Is fresh like a rose Her distance at sight Is closer at night Oh days in dream Will it ever be real!

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Date: 9/2/2017 12:25:00 PM
Nice poem Asad! Lovely image and descriptions!
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Date: 6/1/2017 7:17:00 PM
I love this one Asad. It would be nice to know where it takes place...Nigeria, even some other remoteness. A whale always makes us sit up in wonder as does old and night. It is very real!
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Asad Abdalle
Date: 6/1/2017 7:29:00 PM
Thanks Marian, it is more like a metaphor. it is based on long distance relationship that i had.

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