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Dream

We slept together We dreamt together We saw a dream of nurturing our emotions We saw a dream of growing our love We saw a dream of integrating our souls But then You woke up and walked away And I was there to suffer the pain of our unaccomplished dream.

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Anil Deo
Date: 6/1/2020 2:07:00 AM
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Ibad, this is good. Very good poetry from your heart. Why did U not follow her? Of course, men have their dignity ... equality is important, but not-too-fast in some cultures. My wife is from the Near East, too. Take heart: all lives have dreams left over, "unaccomplished" - so to have a dream is sometimes enough. Thanx to God.
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Anil Deo
Date: 6/1/2020 2:05:00 AM
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Ibad, this is good. Very good poetry from your heart. Why did U not follow her? Of course, men have their dignity ... equality is important, but not-too-fast in some cultures. My wife is from the Near East, too. Take heart: all lives have dreams left over, "unaccomplished" - so to have a dream is sometimes enough. Thanx to God.
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