Dreadful Dream

Dreams can be
Good to heaven
Bad to hell
I had a dream 
Very very dreadful
It started houseful
With cries rule
I had lost my mother
I was steady still
People console me
Around but no result
Instead of people around
I was left all alone
The imagination without her
Had shot circuited me
Who will come to cheer me?
Who will love priceless to me?
Who will fight for me?
I was in real also 
Kept crying in night
Waked up! The moment 
I realized it was dream 
I was left smiling
Happy to see her
That day changed 
My attitude towards her
I am more respectful, polite
And happy ti have her.

                                   by:-
                                   Vrushani Thaker
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Brown Avatar
July 26, 2010 at 12:17 PM
Congratulations on your winning poem Vrushani in John Freeman's contest"Compromising Dreams". Love,Carol
Dietrich Avatar
July 23, 2010 at 12:10 PM
oh, gosh, VRUSHANI, you should see how I mangle my students' names. I teach englsh to foreign students and I can't even pronounce half their names, let alone spell them. And I bet our English names are hard for you as well! (unless you live here in the US?) sorry how I spelled your name. Also my eyes do not see words super well. I have a bit of far sightedness at the computer! LUv, andrea
Sweetheart Avatar
July 23, 2010 at 9:42 AM
Congrats on your big win in John's contest Vrushani with this original and unique creative write.. enjoy your victory dance at the winners circle for a top spot.. with luv..
Dietrich Avatar
July 22, 2010 at 10:03 PM
I bet it felt good to wake from that, Virushani, congatulations on your Honorable Mention in john's contest. Luv, Andrea
Freeman Avatar
July 22, 2010 at 9:41 PM
Congratulations, Vrushani. On your success in the contest. Agape, Moses
Johnson Avatar
July 22, 2010 at 9:29 PM
What a lovely ending and I am so happy that one was a dream.. Congratulations. Love, joyce
Byrne Avatar
July 22, 2010 at 6:45 PM
Dreams work wonders- thanks!
Bloomsfield Avatar
July 22, 2010 at 1:16 PM
lovely,just lovely ending to the dream!
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