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Dreadful Dream

Dreams can be Good to heaven Bad to hell I had a dream Very very dreadful It started houseful With cries rule I had lost my mother I was steady still People console me Around but no result Instead of people around I was left all alone The imagination without her Had shot circuited me Who will come to cheer me? Who will love priceless to me? Who will fight for me? I was in real also Kept crying in night Waked up! The moment I realized it was dream I was left smiling Happy to see her That day changed My attitude towards her I am more respectful, polite And happy ti have her. by:- Vrushani Thaker

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 7/26/2010 12:17:00 PM
Congratulations on your winning poem Vrushani in John Freeman's contest"Compromising Dreams". Love,Carol
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Date: 7/23/2010 12:10:00 PM
oh, gosh, VRUSHANI, you should see how I mangle my students' names. I teach englsh to foreign students and I can't even pronounce half their names, let alone spell them. And I bet our English names are hard for you as well! (unless you live here in the US?) sorry how I spelled your name. Also my eyes do not see words super well. I have a bit of far sightedness at the computer! LUv, andrea
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Date: 7/23/2010 9:42:00 AM
Congrats on your big win in John's contest Vrushani with this original and unique creative write.. enjoy your victory dance at the winners circle for a top spot.. with luv..
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Date: 7/22/2010 10:03:00 PM
I bet it felt good to wake from that, Virushani, congatulations on your Honorable Mention in john's contest. Luv, Andrea
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Date: 7/22/2010 9:41:00 PM
Congratulations, Vrushani. On your success in the contest. Agape, Moses
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Date: 7/22/2010 9:29:00 PM
What a lovely ending and I am so happy that one was a dream.. Congratulations. Love, joyce
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Date: 7/22/2010 6:45:00 PM
Dreams work wonders- thanks!
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Date: 7/22/2010 1:16:00 PM
lovely,just lovely ending to the dream!
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