Dread

Sleep denied, binding sheets
restrained hot, apprehensive form;
beneath the bed, dragons' tails rapped
red staccato on the rails,
those blaze colored beasts
restlessly groaned embered tones,
cauterizing thoughts on Fear's volcanic brand.

Heavy quiet, sinister, 
stealthily slinking in the dark,
gathered like oppressive fog 
about the midnight strike.
The knob chattered, teeth on edge,
a hammer blow of door
on wall before the fall of footsteps 
stabbing down the hall.

Repulsive sound . . . belt undone, 
colliding with the floor,
the hated, clutching heaviness of him
who roughly spoiled.

Copyright, August 9, 2014
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A   Avatar
February 6, 2016 at 4:13 PM
Faye, Congrats on "Your Dark Side of Love WIN!!!" XOX ~LINDA~
Onclaud Avatar
February 5, 2016 at 1:38 PM
well done and rightfully dark, faye.. sweet congrats!..huggs
Gentry Avatar
February 4, 2016 at 9:11 AM
Congratulations on your win! Your dark imagery is very expressive.
Hamilton Avatar
February 4, 2016 at 7:35 AM
very atmospheric Faye superb pen congrats on 2nd place hugs
Allison Avatar
February 4, 2016 at 6:36 AM
You tackled this subject so well Faye congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
Lane Avatar
February 4, 2016 at 6:16 AM
How awful to have to live with such repugnant fear, but a great way of telling the tale. Congratulations on your placement, Faye. I'm glad you resurrected this one...well done.
A  Avatar
June 15, 2015 at 7:46 PM
awesome
Deschler Avatar
June 14, 2015 at 7:39 PM
Amazing imagery in this dark tale of suspense... Great writing, Faye! Congrats on the win!
Dietrich Avatar
September 7, 2014 at 12:34 PM
wow, Faye, I am seeing it again with new eyes from what you told me. you are an amazing talent and your life experiences have given you plenty of ammunition with which to fire away with amazing poetry!
Ryerson Avatar
August 16, 2014 at 5:37 PM
CHILLS, GOOSEBUMPS! What else can I say my friend? YOU, dear lady are on a SERIOUS roll...
K. Avatar
August 16, 2014 at 10:56 AM
Oh wow, you have tackled such a difficult topic with power here, Faye... you've written this quite effectively, that it stays with you and feels that weight after... super congrats on your top win! Also, thank you so much for your inspiring words and the fave, I am honored with that.
A. Sharma Avatar
August 16, 2014 at 1:24 AM
Congrats on big win on an awesome write Faye!
Dietrich Avatar
August 15, 2014 at 11:02 PM
YES< I just knew it would win!!! BIG congrats.
Guzzi Avatar
August 15, 2014 at 10:50 PM
Man the last verse was a verbal rape! you go gal! Congrad's LIGHT & love
De La Luna Avatar
August 15, 2014 at 8:48 PM
Wow, Faye! yea, we both tackled abuse, but i think for this one i will be unfaithful to myself. i love yours, much more than mine, haha!! Congratulations and very well done!!
A   Avatar
August 15, 2014 at 8:41 PM
Congratulations.... Linda
Walker  Avatar
August 15, 2014 at 6:21 PM
Faye, darkly written and fear perceiving... Congratulations on your high marks in the contest... Verlena
Mohn Avatar
August 15, 2014 at 2:44 PM
This really is chilling and well written Faye...you captured the feeling of impending gloom masterfully...congrats
Mehta Avatar
August 15, 2014 at 5:52 AM
You have penned a very sad picture in the poem, congrats on the win, Faye
Puddifoot Avatar
August 15, 2014 at 5:28 AM
faye, I knew this would be a top winner the first time I read it; you've delivered a very chilling write indeed...I love "rapped red staccato" and I like the internal rhyme of wall/fall/hall, echoing the echo of footsteps in a hall...it's a privilege to read poetry such as this - congrats on your top win in my contest! :)
Dietrich Avatar
August 10, 2014 at 5:28 PM
OH MY, another sad picture brilliantly portrayed. You really created the atmosphere of doom and dread here. Is it for the Dark contest?
Gibson Avatar
August 10, 2014 at 5:43 PM
Yes, it is. Thanks, Andrea.
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