Drawn Wrong

Her natural eyebrows she denies
Quickly with a pencil she applies
Drawn way to high
She startled her guy
With a permanent look of surprise!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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July 19, 2017 at 3:50 AM
I have a smile on my face - the poem is perfectly worded - and the picture of the girl is lovely but the eyebrows have to go... - you are very talented
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July 19, 2017 at 3:10 PM
Thank you Verlecia. That's encouraging. (Cool name by the way!) Thanks for commenting! 80] RPA
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July 18, 2017 at 9:24 AM
you painted a perfect picture with your words Roger - yes she sure looks startled lol:-) hugs Jan xx
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July 18, 2017 at 2:01 PM
Thank you Jan!!! Silly stuff. 8o] RP
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