Drawn Wrong

Her natural eyebrows she denies Quickly with a pencil she applies Drawn way to high She startled her guy With a permanent look of surprise!

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Verlecia Fields

Date: 7/19/2017 3:50:00 AM

I have a smile on my face - the poem is perfectly worded - and the picture of the girl is lovely but the eyebrows have to go... - you are very talented

Pat Adams
Date: 7/19/2017 3:10:00 PM

Thank you Verlecia. That's encouraging. (Cool name by the way!) Thanks for commenting! 80] RPA

Jan Allison

Date: 7/18/2017 9:24:00 AM

you painted a perfect picture with your words Roger - yes she sure looks startled lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Pat Adams
Date: 7/18/2017 2:01:00 PM

Thank you Jan!!! Silly stuff. 8o] RP