Notes About The Poem

Sometimes what we see is not the truth.

Sometimes a smudged drawing shows the truth.

 

Drawn On a Stained Page

It’s drawn on the back of a stained notepad , 
On a brown worn, torn paper leaf,
It’s drawn in pencil, that’d broken in half, 
Showing the pain, the trouble and grief,

Showing years of tired hurt wounds,  
Pushing out from the fear,
This drawing of what she owns inside her mind, 
Smudged to vague, makes it clear,

That her smile is a vending machine, 
A fabricated forgery, a fake,
Sent to conceal her pain away from the robots,
It hides her dazed blind ache,

And still, she paints her lips to a smile,
She paints to hide the sad,
The sad that can only be seen when it’s drawn,
All over the back of a pad.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Gauthier Avatar
November 28, 2017 at 10:16 PM
Powerful. Very touching. Well done, Lewis.
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November 28, 2017 at 5:27 AM
Wow Lewis!!! One of the best I've read by you. I can really feel the sadness in your words and imagery. A favorite! ~Judy
Raynes Avatar
November 28, 2017 at 3:33 PM
Thankyou Judy, i think lots of women live this
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