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Drawn In Sand

how quickly the days of our lives scamper in their haste racing in a sprint to scurry across illusive finish lines Extract from ACROSS THE LINE AP: 1st place 2022 Submitted on December 18, 2019 for contest ARBITRIUM DIVISA 5 sponsored by GREGORY R BARDEN - RANKED 4TH

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Michelo Mweetwa

Date: 1/4/2020 11:22:00 PM

Short, sweet and truthful. I no longer count them days, i try to make them count.

Line Gauthier
Date: 1/5/2020 11:37:00 AM

Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, Michelo.

M. L. Kiser

Date: 12/20/2019 12:00:00 PM

The do indeed, good luck in the contest.

Line Gauthier
Date: 12/20/2019 12:28:00 PM

Thanks, ML. Much appreciated.

Timothy Mcguire

Date: 12/19/2019 5:52:00 PM

Wonderful, and so true. That is why I think it is important to tell our family and friends we love them. The ones who are close and the ones far away. For we never know when circumstances change. I would feel terrible if I failed to tell folks that they are important to me.

Line Gauthier
Date: 12/19/2019 6:45:00 PM

Very wise, Timothy. Thanks for your lovely visit and excellent advice.

Lin Lane

Date: 12/19/2019 8:51:00 AM

If only we could gather the knowledge to be able to slow time, but that is impossible. You're right about those illusive finish lines. Once one is crossed, there's always another, and we're off. Good verse, Line. Well wishes in the contest.

Line Gauthier
Date: 12/19/2019 6:46:00 PM

Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, Lin.

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 12/19/2019 1:50:00 AM

You have nailed my life in a nutshell!

Line Gauthier
Date: 12/19/2019 8:45:00 AM

It's hard to get away from that unless we become a recluse.

Gershon Wolf

Date: 12/18/2019 3:32:00 PM

So true, even frighteningly so sometimes. As they say: Treat every day as if it is your last! :) gw

Line Gauthier
Date: 12/18/2019 7:13:00 PM

Best way to live. Thanks, Gershon.