Drawing Us

Drawing us ~ As I walk this path, I draw the night sky on my skin, cosmic outlines, embedded darkness, the softest touch of heart shaped ink, and I imagine you tracing a similar image, caressing these dreams while wishing upon the brightest star glistening above, walking the same path in your part of the world drawing us closer together with each moonlit step we take Good night Soupers

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Sandra Adams

Date: 8/22/2019 4:33:00 PM

i love the imagery in this romantic write...something only a true romantic would do, draw hearts beneath the stars and wish upon them....such a beautifully penned poem :) hugs

Chris Green
Date: 8/22/2019 4:50:00 PM

Thanks Sandy. The night skies are quite enchanting to me. I am happy this one touched you.

Panagiota Romios

Date: 3/13/2019 4:45:00 PM

I think I have been here, doing as you so poetically penned it. So beautiful, indeed. Love, Panagiota

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 1/15/2019 4:21:00 PM

To caress this kind of dream with each moonlit step is special.Oki...I'm glad I got to read this beauty as my last poem of the night...Goodnight:)

Chris Green
Date: 1/15/2019 4:37:00 PM

Good night Charmaine. Thank you for all of your kindness.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 12/19/2018 9:33:00 AM

Just beautiful!

Chris Green
Date: 12/19/2018 10:00:00 AM

Thank you so very much Kim.

Julia Ford

Date: 12/18/2018 11:48:00 PM

this poem is such an escape. so beautiful and romantic!

Chris Green
Date: 12/19/2018 8:24:00 AM

Thank you Julia, I appreciate you stopping by to read and to leave me such nice thoughts. I am happy you liked this one.

Line Gauthier

Date: 12/18/2018 11:15:00 PM

Lovely and romantic, Chris. A FAVE for sure.

Chris Green
Date: 12/19/2018 8:24:00 AM

Thanks so very much Line for your kind words.

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 12/18/2018 11:04:00 PM

Love a poem that makes ya smile :) xomo!

Chris Green
Date: 12/19/2018 8:23:00 AM

Happy you smiled my friend. :)

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 12/18/2018 8:08:00 PM

It's as if they are communing in thought, though separated by distance, Chris. I love your good morning and good night poems...

Chris Green
Date: 12/19/2018 8:23:00 AM

Thank you Carolyn for always being so kind to me.

Gershon Wolf

Date: 12/18/2018 8:05:00 PM

A poem to draw on for inspiration. Nicely done, my friend!! :) gw

Chris Green
Date: 12/19/2018 8:23:00 AM

Thanks so very much GW.

Heidi Sands

Date: 12/18/2018 6:53:00 PM

Oh this is so nice and so coincidental. I just wrote a poem winter stars! and now came to this to see it. You write so beautifully! Thank you for sharing your poetry Chris :)

Chris Green
Date: 12/19/2018 8:22:00 AM

Funny how that happens. :) Thank you Heidi.