Drawing From the Deep Well

Drawing water from deep well
Clear _cool refreshing water
Drop bucket _watch fall
That windless works
That is if you do
Turn _turn the rope
Each turn gets much harder
A lot like life, friend



1.  Drawing (1)     10.  Watch(1)     19.  Turn(3)      27.Like(1)
2.  Water(2)         11.  Fall(1)         20.   The(1)      28.Life(1)
3.  From(1)          12.  That(2)        21.   Rope(1)    29.Friend(1)
4.  Deep(1)          13.  Windless(1) 22.    Each(1)
5.  Well(1)           14.  Works(1)     23.    Gets(1
                                                                                            
6.  Clear(1)         15.   Is(1)          24.    Harder(1)  
7.  Cool(1)          16.   If(1)           25.   A(1)
8.  Refreshing(1)  17.  You(1)        26.    Lot(1)
9.  Drop(1)          18.  Do(1)
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Murphy Avatar
September 17, 2010 at 9:33 AM
very nice so true life is never easy the battle is trying to make it work out for you and you will have a great weekend faleshia
R Avatar
September 16, 2010 at 11:35 AM
Life can be hard sometimes, but you can't stop living...great poem...best wishes in the contest...and I hope you are better with everything in your life now...take care...Emilia
Delacroix Avatar
September 15, 2010 at 7:41 PM
Great work of the pen, Sara! Good luck in the contest. Best wishes, Caroline.
Sweetheart Avatar
September 15, 2010 at 1:14 PM
Excellent and very visual with your 29 words Sara... good luck in Nikko's contest..luv.. have a blessed day as u face your spinal ordeal know u are being prayed for intently..luv..
Devonshire Avatar
September 15, 2010 at 11:00 AM
An amazing and insightful statement about life in your 29 words, Sara. Excellent poem and I wish you success in the contest. Love, Carolyn
A   Avatar
September 15, 2010 at 7:23 AM
Good morning Sara, enjoyed your entry for Nikko's contest good luck,..p.d.
La France Avatar
September 15, 2010 at 7:06 AM
Thanks for commenting on my poetry. This poem is just wonderful, you sure did a great job in using 29 words, not exactly easy was it~~
Kendrick Avatar
September 15, 2010 at 6:07 AM
Here lies a Free Verse Poem in 29 different words if I have counted correctly..Sara
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