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Drawing From the Deep Well

Drawing water from deep well Clear _cool refreshing water Drop bucket _watch fall That windless works That is if you do Turn _turn the rope Each turn gets much harder A lot like life, friend 1. Drawing (1) 10. Watch(1) 19. Turn(3) 27.Like(1) 2. Water(2) 11. Fall(1) 20. The(1) 28.Life(1) 3. From(1) 12. That(2) 21. Rope(1) 29.Friend(1) 4. Deep(1) 13. Windless(1) 22. Each(1) 5. Well(1) 14. Works(1) 23. Gets(1 6. Clear(1) 15. Is(1) 24. Harder(1) 7. Cool(1) 16. If(1) 25. A(1) 8. Refreshing(1) 17. You(1) 26. Lot(1) 9. Drop(1) 18. Do(1)

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Date: 9/17/2010 9:33:00 AM
very nice so true life is never easy the battle is trying to make it work out for you and you will have a great weekend faleshia
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Date: 9/16/2010 11:35:00 AM
Life can be hard sometimes, but you can't stop living...great poem...best wishes in the contest...and I hope you are better with everything in your life now...take care...Emilia
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Date: 9/15/2010 7:41:00 PM
Great work of the pen, Sara! Good luck in the contest. Best wishes, Caroline.
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Date: 9/15/2010 1:14:00 PM
Excellent and very visual with your 29 words Sara... good luck in Nikko's contest..luv.. have a blessed day as u face your spinal ordeal know u are being prayed for intently..luv..
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Date: 9/15/2010 11:00:00 AM
An amazing and insightful statement about life in your 29 words, Sara. Excellent poem and I wish you success in the contest. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 9/15/2010 7:23:00 AM
Good morning Sara, enjoyed your entry for Nikko's contest good luck,..p.d.
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Date: 9/15/2010 7:06:00 AM
Thanks for commenting on my poetry. This poem is just wonderful, you sure did a great job in using 29 words, not exactly easy was it~~
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Date: 9/15/2010 6:07:00 AM
Here lies a Free Verse Poem in 29 different words if I have counted correctly..Sara
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