Dragon Beauty

*DRAGON  BEAUTY*

claws of insanity
locked deep in my dark dungeon
mesmerised by eyes

soft scale like petals
my prisoner forever
heart of a dragon

wrapped around my tail
lost in my ring of fire
naughty demon breath

clever like a beast
taunting my prey like dessert
a spell you can't break

by;p.d.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010


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Date: 5/14/2016 9:22:00 AM
....a spell you can't break...and your poems have some kind of spell my dearest Linda ! I love this poem of yours !!!!!! A7777
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Date: 2/4/2016 11:21:00 PM
hit it **SKAT**
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Date: 7/16/2014 2:16:00 PM
The Dragons Beauty abounds in your words Linda, James......
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Date: 9/17/2013 5:12:00 PM
cleaver write ;}
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Date: 9/10/2013 4:39:00 PM
Hi, PD. Remembering your haiku of the naughty dragon!! Luv ya,Andrea
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Date: 5/25/2013 9:16:00 PM
A surfeit of pleasure and gratefulness I feel that i've clicked & read this one my dearest sis. So captivated & mesmerized by the beauty of your poem about this creature, one symbols of luck esp. for chinese;)). You're really highly creative & imaginative. I've missed this but I've to fave it. Thank you sooo much my very dear sis and friend! love much 4ever, Leonora
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Date: 9/9/2012 9:04:00 AM
love this dragon write, PD. Hope you're having a great Sunday xx
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Date: 5/21/2011 1:04:00 PM
Amazing imagery, PD. Wonderful haikus
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Date: 12/11/2010 5:53:00 AM
SOUP MAIL...my BFF ... urgent.. luv..
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Date: 12/9/2010 7:40:00 AM
i'm captivated. john
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Date: 11/21/2010 3:10:00 PM
Very interesting and very beautiful. Also thank you for your comment :)
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Date: 11/18/2010 1:39:00 PM
Evocative and beautifully written... Thank you for your comments also :)
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Date: 11/15/2010 12:40:00 PM
I love this style and the poem is great!Wonderful :)
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Date: 11/13/2010 3:44:00 AM
very provocative, very descriptive. every word well thought out. I thank you for this and for the comments that you have left on my listings ..... i wish you all the best in all that you do. ... . ... . ... . ill be waiting for your next one!!!!!!! .......... Ryland Matthews
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Date: 11/9/2010 5:51:00 PM
SOUP MAIL.....you are getting so good where's my holiday verse no ones done Thanksgiving or Kwanza???
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Date: 11/6/2010 1:15:00 PM
awesome poem' love Audree
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Date: 11/4/2010 3:15:00 PM
Verse 2 is superior with that first line. That is a winner and mesmerizing. Regards and thank you. Gerard.
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Date: 10/26/2010 3:39:00 AM
nice poem! thanks for your comments :)
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Date: 10/25/2010 9:09:00 AM
Really liked you're poem. And I'm glad you enjoyed A hunters dream. Wrote it last night when I found out my dad got an 11 pointer. Thanks again good luck. Debra Eckstein
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Date: 10/24/2010 10:05:00 AM
Nice one P.D. I love it when my dragon scratches my chest and digs her nails into my back hehe.
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Date: 10/24/2010 8:08:00 AM
Hey p.d., my friend! Awesome sequence of Haikus! Enjoyed the read! And thanks for you kind ciomments!...Tc...Gert:)
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Date: 10/23/2010 2:47:00 PM
Hey my P.D. BFF hope u will enter some of these Halloween contests.. they give me energy to write new things every day... so want to keep up with the challenge Paula put out there for a new poem each day in October... enjoy Christmas..too have many already written but am sure new ones will come to mind... whats up with u luv?
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Date: 10/23/2010 11:16:00 AM
A very interesting write, pd! Really enjoyed this one! Have a nice day! Hugs, Emilia
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Date: 10/23/2010 9:20:00 AM
Hahah awesome write! and I once toldmy dad that I wanted to marry him! lol haha and now I am 16 haha and want to be a doctor well a counslor but that requires a docterat degree lol =>
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Date: 10/23/2010 5:58:00 AM
really enjoyable,and complex,will go over it again, thank you for this write.
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