Dragged Into the Same Situations

Hypnotized, the bare soul asleep
None of the howl could summon it
The morning stars fade in its existence
Engraved within two lives

Path lies but studded with shattered glass
A man came with the tears, voiced his pain
Spewing all the disappointments, lost in his escape
Just like a life that I ever had, stabbed 
When everything stuck in a maze of shaft

We both have the same sun
But the sun with a miscellaneous face
Randomly it blasts our universe
But mostly it shines for the sake of itself 

Roam in the world called wild, we walk with no guiding cane
We just walk, fingering the trail of remain shadows
Perhaps we are the most regardless creature on earth
For we are blind to the fragility of our own

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 6/13/2013 5:49:00 PM
Beautifully done! congrats Kim
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Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 6/13/2013 5:58:00 PM
Thank you Kim :D glad to be part of your contest :D wishing you a wonderful day :D hug, yanny
Date: 6/8/2013 6:22:00 PM
Hi Yanny, I miss you. Hope all is well, let me know how you are doing. Hugs Rick
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Date: 6/9/2013 7:29:00 PM
Miss you too Rick :D all are well in here, I am really happy to have a visit by you today, hope that we could keep in touch :D hug, yanny
Date: 6/2/2013 8:08:00 AM
That is true we give ourselves more solidity than exists, yet in the end if we give our fragility to God he will insure we are eternal.
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Date: 6/2/2013 10:23:00 AM
Agreee :D thanks Rick for stopping by :D hope you are having a wonderful day there :D hug, yanny
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