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Bat's fang ditches, vampiric disease needs stitches, as carmine blood seeps, forever now she sleeps

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Date: 10/16/2023 4:52:00 PM
A spooky Halloween write Anaya, Nicely penned
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I Am Anaya
Date: 10/16/2023 7:48:00 PM
Thank you, Joseph!
Date: 10/16/2023 10:38:00 AM
it's cool to see examples of this poem. I did not realize these poems were so short
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Date: 10/18/2023 9:44:00 PM
I'd best not give any advice for Alexandrine, not my place...check Suzette's blog. love you xoxox
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Date: 10/16/2023 10:46:00 AM
Accent on syllables involved, check to make sure, this one is not for the contest, thanks for the visit, Andrea, Have a nice day!
Date: 10/12/2023 4:02:00 AM
Beautiful and spooky one, my son gets me to watch these stuff, sometimes i have to close my eyes ahh! I prefer reading one on this and not watching. Your way with writing is truly stunning and you’ve created a very fitting one for the mood right now too! “ forever now she sleeps” that line stood out for me the most! Love this
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Date: 10/12/2023 7:29:00 PM
Thank you, IE! I'm in the mood yes, this one is just for fun, I hope it wasn't too disturbing for you. I can handle it because I grew up watching these old blk and whites with my grandmother. It's the new horror that freaks me out, I won't watch it. The singer is fun to watch he is harmless, a lover of the old stuff as well! I'm really happy you like it. :)
Date: 10/12/2023 3:30:00 AM
Woah, an eerie write with spine-chilling atmosphere, really haunting!! "Carmine blood seeps, forever now she sleeps" That's really so intriguing and daunting at the same time! A creative write dear Anaya, although I don't watch horror movies these days, but I still found this very interesting to read! Brilliant Alexandrine :)
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Date: 10/12/2023 7:31:00 PM
Thank you, IE! I'm in the mood yes, this one is just for fun, I hope it wasn't too disturbing for you. It's a good thing you don't watch horror, too much stuff going on out there, wars, who needs it. Glad you found it interesting, this one not for a contest. Thank you, Hiya! :)
Date: 10/12/2023 2:48:00 AM
Long time ago, I saw the film and afterwards, I could not sleep. Now I know better and admire the way you poetically described the bloodsucker. Blessings.
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Date: 10/12/2023 7:32:00 PM
Same thing happens to many of us. This is just for fun, hope it wasn't too gorey for you Victor! :)
Date: 10/11/2023 1:37:00 PM
Ha! Bela Lugosi. The scariest of them all. I used to watch that stuff as a kid. Yipe! I stay away from horror these days
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Date: 10/11/2023 1:44:00 PM
Good idea, I refuse to see certain horror myself, although bringing back the old blk & whites as does Rob Zombie in his 90's stuff I find humorous. I get a kick out of campy thrillers!! I've moved on to sci-fi I just love it! Thanks for the visit.

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