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Dracula

Bat's fang ditches, vampiric disease needs stitches,
as carmine blood seeps, forever now she sleeps

darkdesirealexandrine

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Joseph May

October 16, 2023 at 4:52 PM

A spooky Halloween write Anaya, Nicely penned

I Am Anaya

October 16, 2023 at 7:48 PM

Thank you, Joseph!

Andrea Dietrich

October 16, 2023 at 10:38 AM

it's cool to see examples of this poem. I did not realize these poems were so short

I Am Anaya

October 18, 2023 at 9:44 PM

I'd best not give any advice for Alexandrine, not my place...check Suzette's blog. love you xoxox

I Am Anaya

October 16, 2023 at 10:46 AM

Accent on syllables involved, check to make sure, this one is not for the contest, thanks for the visit, Andrea, Have a nice day!

Ink Empress

October 12, 2023 at 4:02 AM

Beautiful and spooky one, my son gets me to watch these stuff, sometimes i have to close my eyes ahh! I prefer reading one on this and not watching. Your way with writing is truly stunning and you’ve created a very fitting one for the mood right now too! “ forever now she sleeps” that line stood out for me the most! Love this

I Am Anaya

October 12, 2023 at 7:29 PM

Thank you, IE! I'm in the mood yes, this one is just for fun, I hope it wasn't too disturbing for you. I can handle it because I grew up watching these old blk and whites with my grandmother. It's the new horror that freaks me out, I won't watch it. The singer is fun to watch he is harmless, a lover of the old stuff as well! I'm really happy you like it. :)

Hiya Sharma

October 12, 2023 at 3:30 AM

Woah, an eerie write with spine-chilling atmosphere, really haunting!! "Carmine blood seeps, forever now she sleeps" That's really so intriguing and daunting at the same time! A creative write dear Anaya, although I don't watch horror movies these days, but I still found this very interesting to read! Brilliant Alexandrine :)

I Am Anaya

October 12, 2023 at 7:31 PM

Thank you, IE! I'm in the mood yes, this one is just for fun, I hope it wasn't too disturbing for you. It's a good thing you don't watch horror, too much stuff going on out there, wars, who needs it. Glad you found it interesting, this one not for a contest. Thank you, Hiya! :)

Victor Buhagiar

October 12, 2023 at 2:48 AM

Long time ago, I saw the film and afterwards, I could not sleep. Now I know better and admire the way you poetically described the bloodsucker. Blessings.

I Am Anaya

October 12, 2023 at 7:32 PM

Same thing happens to many of us. This is just for fun, hope it wasn't too gorey for you Victor! :)

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