Dr Jekyll and Mr Hyde's Love Poem

I love how your long chestnut hair flows over your gentle shoulders,
And when the sun searches you out for a moment, your hair sparkles…

Because I lit a match and threw it into that rat infested hair ball that you
Waste all your time on.  Next up is your head which I’m going to rip…

Don’t listen to him.  I’m mesmerized by your deep blue eyes, when they lovingly
Gaze In my direction.  I will never make you shed a tear, my dear…

But I’m going to kick you about this filthy house.  It looks like all you’ve
Done all day is piss in the wind.  And stop your crying; your baggy eyes are…

Ignore him, my love.  Your soft, gentle touch upon my face arouses my senses to new Heights.  All my cares wash away as your aquiline hand slowly glides along my arm…

What the hell does he know?  If you don’t get your boney hand off me, I’m going to break it In half.  And the next time I catch you trying to be nice I’m going to throw you out with…

Stop that, Hyde.  Sorry, my love, but as I was saying, your body is a masterpiece sculpted out of the finest treasures.  I’m in awe of its supple curves, how it flinches to the touch…

Oh, shut up Doc, you’re killing me.  And speaking of killing, I feel like pummeling
The living daylights out of your emaciated, piece of good for nothing…

Please be mine baby, before I’m lost forever to…

I’m in charge, so get over here and take it like…

I’m fading, my love.  Hurry, say you’ll be mine.  Save us.

I’m going to tear you apart.  You’re no baby, you’re a…

Save me, before the monster wins…

Too late, Dr., she will be all mine soon…

Just a kiss, my dear.  Just a…

‘Slap’, take that b****...

One kiss.  Now!  -The Dr. and his lover kiss-  Thank you, my love.  Let that vile 
Monster rest in peace, so that we will be left in peace from it for evermore.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Delaney Avatar
April 20, 2013 at 6:00 PM
Very entertaining from beginning to end. The switches are all we expect them to be. SuZ
Jordan Avatar
March 25, 2013 at 11:11 AM
A fantastic rendition of a dual personality with a generous touch of humor. Nice work! Jack
Dietrich Avatar
March 18, 2013 at 3:10 PM
oh this is sure fun. The premise is awesome!! reminds me also of that talent show I saw where a guy was dressed as two different people and he would turn one way to show one side of his body and turn the other way to show his other side.
Bellville Avatar
March 17, 2013 at 6:35 AM
Awesome write. Definitely one of my favorites.
Martin Avatar
March 16, 2013 at 1:44 PM
David, this is my first foray into your WACKY WORLD of poetry and I'm still laughing my guts out! BRILLIANT piece of writing and by the way... thanks for stopping by and visiting my place earlier. Your positive comments most appreciated. I'll be back more of your amazing poetry later. Cheers, Terry
Johnson Avatar
March 15, 2013 at 7:02 PM
love it mate...bloody good
Hunter Avatar
March 15, 2013 at 1:51 PM
Oh my God, this is funny...seriously.
Hicks Avatar
March 9, 2013 at 4:29 PM
Nothing like a little two-sidedness to get your attention... what I like most about this is it's creativity. One personality is hopelessly cheesy while the other is psychotically angry... the real question is which is worse? LOL! Honestly speaking though it's real clever work!
Williams Avatar
March 8, 2013 at 11:57 AM
David this is a great use of imagination...David
Lamoureux Avatar
March 8, 2013 at 9:03 AM
Simply brilliant, I was mesmorized from beginning to end.
Jones Avatar
March 7, 2013 at 6:04 PM
This sounds like someone I know actually....great poem.......wonderful....
Guzzi Avatar
March 7, 2013 at 1:45 PM
LOl..well your bad self is a bit more convincing that your good self..hmm..very interesting and fruedian! Light & Love
A   Avatar
March 7, 2013 at 10:57 AM
wow.... wow...wow~ PD
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