Dr Feel Good

Dr. P.D. Feel Good vs.' Doc the Poet (#2

Doc, you can keep wearing my CROWN.
It goes perfect with your pink hospital gown.
I am the one that damaged and demolished all your goods
Now you’re like a tr@mp roaming the hoods
Diagnose your poetry under a form of drug abuse. 
If you want to be a real princess, cover up them bruise. 
Step into my office, -I'm the Dr. Feel Good of abuse.
My assistant will stamp and shave you like a sheep.
With the consumption, you’re not for human use.

Doc, I will be your worst nightmare.
My ambush of words will leave you in fear.
My assistant Nathan will leave you babbling,
As he gives you a PAP SMEAR.
You cannot escape my mental destruction gear.
STUTTERING as you get donkey punched in the rear.

You will cry for mercy as I hammer in your head.
Begging my assistant to put you out of misery.
Screwing with your mind, laughing at your history.
Cooking your words like chicken cacciatore.
Forgetting to add herbs to your so-called poetry.
Now who is the one with the ALZHEIMER'S poetry disease?
Now I have you on your knees.
Making you suffer while you foam at the teeth.
Spiting my speech disorder all over your face.
Your slam has no speed to continue with this race.
You’re nothing but a rat, running thru my maze
My assistant is setting traps in your house
Starving and making you trip like an experimental mouse.

Crushing your amphetamines high thread.
I'm going to take your poetic head, 
Cram it into the hospital bed.
Awe Doc, All them tears I will make you shed.
Doc, your poetry will be crying for mercy instead. 
My pen will inject you a poetic black and blue full of lead.
Refusing you Penicillin, for your infection, over bled.
Adding salt to your wounds, screaming (DR. P.oetic D.read!)
All in time Doc, you will fear me until you go brain dead
Asking for an over dose wishing you were dead.
Knowing that Dr. P.D. Feel Good~is laughing in her head.
By the time, you snap to, I am still way ahead of you.

by;p.d.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 2/4/2016 11:24:00 PM
i miss them dayz
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Date: 11/22/2013 9:46:00 PM
Linda This write is creative and imaginative. You really know how to dig in and slam someone very harshly. LOL Remind me not to get on your bad side. HEE HEE Thanks for the insightful and great comment on my Sad Pit poem Hugs
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Date: 12/23/2010 8:52:00 AM
This one just seemed to pull me into it.. Enjoyed your poetry today.. Oh yeah, I think you have the same taste as my best friend Terence! I'll get him to check out some of your stuff, I got him to make an account on here a few days ago.. Dana'lynn
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Date: 11/30/2010 9:09:00 PM
this makes me feel like im way behind. how can i catch up with this? at first i could but i lost it somewhere. the art of the slam went on without me. and now i feel like a wounded duck.
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Date: 11/20/2010 2:54:00 PM
Look-a-here girl, everyone has some form that they excell greatly in and I think this is YOU, no one does a slam as good as you do. Let no one tell you differently, you are great!!! Thanks for your stopover. Blessings, Joy (Jew)
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Date: 11/16/2010 5:21:00 PM
hell yeah very good and talented one the sickest I've heard, well i should say read. much love and respect keep up the work. ~Tanner Cox a.k.a ~ProFound
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Date: 11/6/2010 6:40:00 PM
Had to come by and read this one again! I just posted my own little rap verse on here. Still, I love this one!
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Date: 10/29/2010 8:36:00 PM
hahahaha. WHAT!? This was freaking brilliant. Even though you were joking, your flow was impressive. I take it rapping was too easy so you had to write to give your skill purpose. That's my story too. I am a free verse guy but I write verses still. We should totally parody some popular music sometimes. Good stuff my friend. Great
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Date: 10/16/2010 11:40:00 PM
thanks for making me laugh..hahaha
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Date: 10/16/2010 8:09:00 PM
just saying hi and bye!! hahaha he is still reeling from it! bet he never knew what hit him!! ttyl I gotta run :)
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Date: 10/16/2010 11:00:00 AM
Indeed a pleasure to read with wonderful poetic flow with a precious and steady beat and storyline,,all the best in your writings and Thank you so much for reading and addressing my words,,,Blessings..Cecil
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Date: 10/11/2010 7:15:00 PM
OK Spielberg! love it.
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Date: 10/11/2010 4:36:00 PM
you make true gangster rappers look like fat cub scouts with running noses...wow
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Date: 10/8/2010 9:34:00 PM
Thanks!! lol
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Date: 10/7/2010 5:39:00 PM
wonderful! very...interesting! ^.^
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Date: 10/6/2010 8:39:00 AM
A very entertaining and interesting read. Your creativity blows me away!
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Date: 10/2/2010 7:40:00 PM
LMFAO!! FoAM AT THE TEETH*luv~SKAT
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Date: 10/2/2010 6:05:00 PM
Noww this one rocks! :D Love Audree
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Date: 10/2/2010 5:28:00 PM
completely satisfied with this PD I'm impressed greatly
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Date: 10/2/2010 11:46:00 AM
wow babe. wow. talk about fangs babe lol. oi oi oi very good slam. love you xoxoxoxoxo
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Date: 10/2/2010 9:35:00 AM
Lol, why dont I feel good after reading this one PD? Hehe enjoyed your rumble in the hospital. Hope your weekend is a stunning one ;) Wilma
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Date: 10/1/2010 11:23:00 PM
Hey, P.D you are getting lots of comments piling up since I recently saw this one! why, yes, of course I entered your contest. I always want to support my good friends when they have a contest, and yours are usually awesome! Luv, Andrea
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Date: 10/1/2010 6:54:00 PM
Your welcome:)
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Date: 10/1/2010 6:41:00 PM
Thanks for the help!
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Date: 10/1/2010 4:42:00 PM
So well written, P.D.! And thank you for your kind comments! Have a great Sunday!...Gert
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